


How to improve, is it the eyes?
No references used, but art from artists I’ve done studies on recently added below.
Hi! I’m stuck on how to fix this drawing. I’ve been doing a lot of style studies lately of artists I like because I don’t like my style and have hit a road block here. Is there anything super obvious that needs fixing? Anatomy, lighting, values, etc. I’ve included the piece I’m talking about and two pieces from two artists I’ve done recent style studies on, just in case anyone can also point out anything really obvious I’m fumbling there. I’ve mostly been trying to learn from their use of lighting and shape language.