Feedback on my Webnovel synopsis

Sixteen year old Adam Forster has gone through alot for someone his age. From suffering from both ADHD and PTSD to burning down schools and annoying teachers accumulating multiple arson charges under his name, it didn't come as a surprise when a field trip to the museum ending up with him face-to-face with a literally spawn of death and finding out that he belongs to a special group people with supernatural abilities... shocker there. Follow Adam in his journey through the absolutely choatic and unpredictable world of Axiom.

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u/More-Impact925 — 4 days ago

I want to share my work and make friends (mainly) and see if anyone is interested in my story (hopefully)

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My name is Nonchalant Biker. I'm an amateur writer working on the first volume of my webnovel, and I've been inspired by a bunch of different stories—so I decided to create my own. Also, I'm kinda lonely and thought this would be a good way to make friends. So here we are.

In this world, we have magicians. And no, not the kind that pull rabbits out of hats or play with cards. Being a magician in my world sucks. Your life is literally cooked.

First of all, you have to fight monsters called Spawns. These things create fear and feed on it. The more terrified people are of something, the more likely it becomes what they fear and far more horrifying. So if someone tells you that a 100-foot spider that can shoot dynamite and has the body of a diamond? My friend, that is exactly what you're going to deal with. Because someone had the most creative imagination

Oh, and did I mention you also have to deal with other magicians? Politics, backstabbing, and the fact that your powers literally cost you something?

Yeah. It's not a glamorous life.

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Synopsis

In a world where magic is real but hidden behind a barrier called the Veil, magicians are not wizards in towers—they are soldiers, miners, and janitors of reality. Their job is to fight Spawn: creatures born from fear and feeding on it. The more people fear something, the more likely it becomes real. Spiders. Shadows. Gods. Whatever you're scared of, it's out there.

The story follows a 17-year-old Latent Adam (mundane-turned-magician) who is thrown into the Haven—a secret training ground in London—where he gets caught into choatic sagas and the social politics of young Magicians.

The story takes place in London, and it's got a lot of edgy and dark humor—because if you're going to fight nightmare monsters and slowly lose your humanity, you might as well laugh about it.

I've put a lot of detail and time into this world, and I'd love to get your honest reviews. If you're interested, I can drop some character bios and explain the power system—no major spoilers, just the basics.

And I'm not quite sure I'm allowed to do this here (it's my first time using Reddit)

P.S In summary I'm just a lonely guy who wants to make friends.

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u/More-Impact925 — 1 month ago

I'm currently on volume 4 of Shadow Slave and i got too inspired to write a webnovel.

My name is Nonchalant Biker. I'm an amateur writer working on the first volume of my webnovel, and I've been inspired by a bunch of different stories—so I decided to create my own. Also, I'm kinda lonely and thought this would be a good way to make friends. So here we are.

In this world, we have magicians. And no, not the kind that pull rabbits out of hats or play with cards. Being a magician in my world sucks. Your life is literally cooked.

First of all, you have to fight monsters called Spawns. These things create fear and feed on it. The more terrified people are of something, the more likely it becomes what they fear and far more horrifying. So if someone tells you that a 100-foot spider that can shoot dynamite and has the body of a diamond? My friend, that is exactly what you're going to deal with. Because someone had the most creative imagination

Oh, and did I mention you also have to deal with other magicians? Politics, backstabbing, and the fact that your powers literally cost you something?

Yeah. It's not a glamorous life.

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Synopsis

In a world where magic is real but hidden behind a barrier called the Veil, magicians are not wizards in towers—they are soldiers, miners, and janitors of reality. Their job is to fight Spawn: creatures born from fear and feeding on it. The more people fear something, the more likely it becomes real. Spiders. Shadows. Gods. Whatever you're scared of, it's out there.

The story follows a 17-year-old Latent Adam (mundane-turned-magician) who is thrown into the Haven—a secret training ground in London—where he gets caught into choatic sagas and the social politics of young Magicians.

The story takes place in London, and it's got a lot of edgy and dark humor—because if you're going to fight nightmare monsters and slowly lose your humanity, you might as well laugh about it.

I've put a lot of detail and time into this world, and I'd love to get your honest reviews. If you're interested, I can drop some character bios and explain the power system—no major spoilers, just the basics.

And I'm not quite sure I'm allowed to do this here (it's my first time using Reddit)

P.S In summary I'm just a lonely guy who wants to make friends.

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u/More-Impact925 — 1 month ago