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So I’m new here obviously and I’ve always thought about buying the game a few times but I find farming games boring. I know it’s a dumb question but I feel like I’d like it but also may not?

I haven’t worked on my fangan a few months cause I’m stuck on the death order and character arcs, I know it’s kinda a “get good” situation but if anybody has any tips or something I’d appreciate it cause I wanna work on it but I have no clue where to go next?

I think this is kinda self-explanatory; how do I decide what order my characters die in?

So I’m new to Fanganronpa making and I made the first murder, and wanted to ask if it has too many plot holes.

So the killer is The Ultimate Thief, and the victim is The Ultimate Powerlifter. So the killer who’s name is Pearl stalks the victim named Brandon and learns he and another character work out together at night, so one night she runs through the kitchen and grabs a knife by stealing the key from The Ultimate Chef to the kitchen which was hidden in his closet. She runs through the cafeteria and goes into the nearby gym ready to kill him, but he turns around before she can pull out the knife, so she grabs a nearby dumbbell and beats him with it. She throws the hoodie she was wearing, which belonged to another character, onto a weight rack to frame her.

It’s a bit sloppy and I wanted to ask for help; also wanted to add she didn’t hide the body because someone was coming and she didn’t have time to hide it so she ran.

So I’m not making a fan-game, I’m making like a book. I have no clue how to write the story in a way that stays similar to the games Daily Life segments. Like I have all the important parts and I’m gonna think about how to glue segments together and arcs together, but I need to know how to make them in a way that doesn’t make each character too 2d and make the story drag for way longer than needed. May post may not make sense but if you understand please help?

This may be the wrong subreddit to post this in but I wanted to ask how to adjust my story.
I don’t know a ton about Danganronpa and I when I started a story because the idea is awesome realized I have no clue what I’m doing.
So to summarize the first kill The Ultimate Thief kills The Ultimate Jock (if that’s a role), she learns his training buddy is late to workout sessions so at 2am when he’s waiting for his buddy she tries to sneak and grab a knife, but The Ultimate Chef walks in and she hides dropping the knives, she runs into the gym and beats him with the dumbbells, she runs off to find makeup (which she spills) to cover up the bruises and people find him together with water spilled on him to frame The Ultimate Fisher who is his buddy, who has a leaky water bottle. I know it sucks and might be uncomplicated but that’s why I’m asking for help?

I may be wrong on this so correct me if I’m wrong, but Jax haters make me pretty annoyed. They always say Jax as a Main Character came out of no where and he got no screen time in the older episodes, which is true, but thinking about Pomni, how much development has she got since Episode 5-6? Cause it’s like none, the first 4 were for her to breathe, then Jax got introduced to breathe for himself, if they were both Main Characters at the same time it’d feel rushed or forced, plus the only character besides Pomni to get developed before Episode 5 was Kinger to help drive the plot, so they’re both Main Characters but were written to let them flesh out alone then work together as characters in Episode 8-9. I may be wrong but it’s smart writing to wait for Jax’s arc, though I do Bruce it could’ve started earlier the first 4 episodes were for Pomni and last 4 for Jax. I hope I’m not wrong.