A song I'm finally happy with titled "Never Care"
It's had many drafts and started off as just a verse, but here's the finished thing for you guys!! Looking for constructive feedback
[Verse 1]
Last night was the first time
You said nothing back, should I be worried?
Is this the very first sign?
You're so, down bad for me
Is that why you are out drinking at parties?
And probably about to leave
[Chorus]
Maybe it's a joy ache
That rush, it's sinking away
I stare at the ceiling in mental irrepair
Knowing you will never really care
Maybe it's a glitter bruise
That will never see us through
I draw hearts round your silhouette
Knowing you will never care
[Verse 2]
Last night was the first time
You were drunk on voicemail, sober thoughts spilling out
Another goddamn sign?
You tell me, you're so in love
Yet when I need you most, I'm always shut down
To people please, am I not enough?
[Chorus]
Maybe it's a joy ache
That rush, it's sinking away
I stare at the ceiling in mental irrepair
Knowing you will never really care
Maybe it's a glitter bruise
That will never see us through
I draw hearts round your silhouette
Knowing damn well you will never care
You will never care
[Outro]
Cynical, hearts out of synch
Whimsical, our love was for the bit
If keeping you means crying over nothing (oh)
Then I must let it slip out my hands (but it's hard)