u/BackgroundRich7614

Good Themes don't justify poor writing (Chainsaw Man, Last Skywalker, and Steven Universe Finale)

A pushback against criticisms of controversial media that I hear a lot is some variation of "(x) controversial plot point fits the themes of the story" and while I respect the attention to the themes of a given work, most of the times this defense is tried it doesn't really hold up.

See while having themes are important to story's, they aren't the only thing a story requires. A story needs consistent and enjoyable characterization, it needs good pacing, it needs some tension, and it needs a basic respect for the audience's time and investment. Sacrificing everything else for poorly executed themes is like burning a forest to save a tree.

Now since I hate Vague posting here are some examples...

While there are many essays going over how CSM's ending lines up with its themes, I will just go ahead and say no matter what thematic point was trying to be achieve, it will never be satisfying to have your MC's entire story (the one readers spent years and hours of their life invested in) basically get erased from existence and rendered moot. To add salt on the wounds, this wasn't even Denji's choice, he just gets forced this ending without any in-put.

For the Last Skywalker, I get they wanted to hammer home the idea of failure being the greatest teacher, but they did it in the worst way possible. The Last Jedi took a beloved hero who was known to never give up when his friends lives were in danger and the symbol of what it means to be a Jedi and turned him into a failure that runs away from his mistakes. A story more befitting the theme was not worth destroying your 2nd most iconic character.

For Steven Univiverse, I get the main theme was redemption and Steven wasn't going to turn into the punisher, I get that and I actually love many kindhearted characters that want to see the good in others like Superman and Luz Noceda. The problem is that they had the 3 big bad main antagonists, that ruled over an authoritarian nightmare state that attempts mass genocide on the regular, and who created a superweapon out of the shattered souls fused together, completely switch their entire worldview in the span of like 3 conversations with minimal pushback. Imagine if Ozai, Bill Cipher, Belos, Voldemort, or Darkseid became good guys after a quick chat. Petty antagonists and bullies often need seasons of development to have them turning over a new leaf make sense and feel earned.

So while Themes are very important to writing, they are just a part of the building, and a plot point fitting thematically doesn't make it automatically good. When making a puzzle, a piece has to fit into the entire hole, not just part of it. Or for a cooking explanation, having the correct ingredients on paper doesn't mean anything if you burn it to a crisp while cooking it.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 1 day ago
▲ 51 r/swtor

Does the Imperial Hoth planet story feel a bit underwhelming to anyone else?

I am playing a Sith Warrior who goes around looking to win glory for the empire and win the war for them. I have done pretty much every single Planet Story and Bonus Series, but I don't really see much point in doing the Hoth story, not because it's bad (it's not) but because its stakes feel small scale and not very relevant, especially for such a late planet.

In Dromund Kaas you help infiltrate and cripple a dangerous Cult forming in the Empire Heart (before Reven came back).

In Balmora you help to crush a rebellion in a crucial arms producing word and yours gains at least ensured the Empire still has a foothold on it even after losing most of it later.

On Nar Shadar you maintain and Expand the Empires grip on the underworld and gain the alliance of a key information broker.

On Tatooine you find a powerful Rakatan artifact that you can make ally with the Empire after avoiding near disaster with a nanomachine zombie plague.

On Alderaan you ensure the Imperial ally of House Thuul is poised to take the throne of a majorly influential core world.

On Taris you pretty much destroy the planet and deal the Republic a massive symbolic and military loss.

Even Quesh is pretty important due to it being where you can bait the Republic into breaking the Treaty of Coruscant and being a major adrenal producer.

By contrast Hoth just has you save the Imperial presence on a planet whose main job is just to bleed out the Republic a bit, important sure, but that's not really something that will go down as a pivotal event in the history books, made worse by it being one of the latest planet story's and in-between the massively important planet story arcs of Taris and Belsavis.

Compared to what came after (Taris, Alderaan, Nar Shaddar, Quesh, Dromund Kas, and even Tatooine) and what comes after (Belsavis, Voss, and Corellia) Hoth seems like a bit of a "filler" story arc.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 2 days ago
▲ 22 r/swtor

What ending choice makes the most sense for a lightside patriotic Sith on the Voss planetary storyline.

In the Voss Imperial storyline you have the choice to either tell the Mystics of Voss that the Jedi poisoned their planet or that they and the Gormak are one in the same (why we can't say both I don't know)

On the one hand, telling the Voss the Jedi are responsible for their woes is great for the Sith Empire, on the other hand a Light side Sith probably doesn't want the Voss's war with the Gormak to continue and destroy their planet.

What makes the most sense for a Sith with a love for the Empire and a sense of honor and compassion.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 2 days ago

How would you rank the Hexsquad by intelligence

Personally, this would be my ranking.

  1. Luz: She is basically Belos but good IQ wise. By raw feats she is like the 2nd smartest character in the show and is a prodigy at the theory aspect of magic. Luz only did bad in school due to a lack of interest and poor teachers as seen by her thriving in Hexside despite taking multiple times the coursework of other students. Luz struggles with impulsiveness due to her personality and youth, but as an adult she will probably reach Belos tier mastery of Glyphs and mental manipulation.
  2. Gus: He is a prodigy that skipped grades and is currently a teacher at a college. Him and Luz are pretty even in raw intellect, though Luz has higher EQ.
  3. Hunter: He has a good deal of training and know a lot about Wild Magic despite Belos best efforts. While not as cunning as Luz, he does have his moments here and there.
  4. Amity: She was a star student and is an abomination magic prodigy. While not as smart as her GF, she is plenty intelligent.
  5. Vee: She isn't a genius or a prodigy, but she has the most common sense and seems to be very adaptable.
  6. Willow: She is average, not dumb, but the competition was just fierce, and someone has to be at the bottom. She relies on raw power to make up for a lack of magical understanding or skill.
u/BackgroundRich7614 — 2 days ago

Who amongst the Jedi & Sith would be Grandmaster Luke's nightmare matchup?

Luke is by far and away the strongest Jedi to ever exist, but he isn't infallible and he does have weaknesses that some characters could use to possibly eek out an upset if everything goes right for them.

For starters no one is overpowering Luke in a straight fight, so anyone hoping to beat Luke needs to rely on evening the odds with unusual ability or trickery. Luke also never goes all out unless pushed to the brink so that's a point in his enemies favor as they won't just get one shot.

Palpatine, while a heavy weight, tends to not use his more esoteric powers combatively as seen with his prior fights with Luke so he is out.

Yoda dosen't have anything to even the odds given he is a painfully straightforward combatant so he gets steamrolled.

Krayt might actually stand a better chance than Palpatine due to being shown draining Lukes power in their brief alliance but I doubt this buff could solely carry him to victory unless Luke lets his guard down for a Dark Transfer attack.

The people with the best shot of Luke are Jedi Sages and Sith Sorcerers that might have a lethal trick that Luke might not know how to counter.

Vitiates Force Drain, Mental domination, and body duplication might throw Luke off guard for a bit but I don't think he has anything to one-shot Luke before he gets serious and crushes Vitiate.

Nomi Sunriders Force Light is busted and could sever Lukes ability to use the force but it's not a certainty since how the power works and it's limits are unclear.

The best bet to bring down Luke is thus Darth Nihilus. Luke is proven to not have resistance to force Drain given Krayt was able to drain him, and Krayt drain is far inferior to the guy that can eat the planet. Luke CAN one-shot Nihilus before he raises his hand by that isn't in character for Luke so Luke probably becomes yet another snack for the Sith.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 3 days ago

Despite being the founder of the "Sith Inquisitor" archetype as SWTOR described it, Palpatine actually fights much more like a Sith Warrior when in Combat.

While yes Palpatine does LOVE to spam lightning attacks and is VERY knowledgeable in Darkside's more esoteric nature.

However, Palpatine doesn't really seem to use these more sorcerous abilities in actual combat aside from the aforementioned lightning and basic TK attacks, fighting more like Sith Warriors like Darth Malgus but with a focus on speed rather than strength.

We see in all his major fights with people like Mace Windu, Yoda, and Luke that he tends to attempt to win with pure saber skill and then switches to lightning and telekinesis when that doesn't work, but Palpatine never even uses stuff like Force Drain in combat (which Luke, Yoda, and Mace canonically can't resist) nor does he bust out any Sith spells.

In a comparison between Darth Bane and Zannah I would actually say Palpatine is much more similar to Darth Bane, being grandscale manipulators with a mastery of the Darkside who nonetheless are rather blunt in the application of the force while in combat.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 3 days ago

Were the Nekghouls ever brought up in Star Wars after SWTOR.

For those that don't know Nekghouls are a mutant strain of Rakghouls found on Taris during the SWTOR era that are fully sentient and can use the Force.

After the defeat of Jedi Master Sulan the Lightside Sith Warrior (in my run at least) convinces the Nekghouls to embrace the Darkside and kill Sulan, causing them to retreat from their alliance with the republic and take a more neutral stance.

I LOVE the Nekghouls as a concept and think that they would make for great Sith Juggernauts during the Old and New Sith Wars or just as their own Darkside faction afterwards.

Do we have any information about what happened to these fascinating creatures by the time of the Prequels and Original Trilogy, and does Lukes NJO ever interact with one?

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 5 days ago

I kind of hope Angel Dust doesn't get to heaven in season 3.

Now, I do want Angel Dust to eventually get to heaven, but I just have an issue with Angel Dust getting to heaven without fully coming back to Hotel and spending some more time with the main cast.

Despite what fan fics might say Angle Dust doesn't have THAT close of a relationship with people like Charlie, Vaggi, and the rest of the Hotel not named Husk. So, in my opinion it would just be a bit of a waste to shunt him to heaven before he could develop a closer friendship and understanding with Charlie.

Plus if any character should get to heaven in season 3, it would say Cherri Bomb fits best given she would want to get redeemed to be with Pentious, and assuming her sin is minor, it would be a good beginners test for Charlie to see if she can redeem slightly more complicated cases before she circles back to Angle Dust after helping free him from Val.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 5 days ago

How would you rank Luz Noceda from The Owl House in terms of development, enjoyability, depth, execution, innovativeness, dynamics with other characters, and conclusion? (Highest Grade is S+ and lowest is F-)

Personally here are my rankings:

Development: B, maybe not the most drastic change in fiction but she went from a naive kid in over her head to a proper hero ready to save a realm.

Enjoyability: A+, she was very fun as the MC, and had a lot of charm to her character, though not to the level where I would put her in the S rank.

Depth: B, she isn't the most complex character I have ever seen but she does have alot of hidden depth regarding her desire to be understood and her psychological quirks.

Execution: S, her story is just very well made. Few things feal out of place, the pacing is on point, and her growth as a character is some of the most seamless, I have ever seen.

Innovativeness: C, this is probably her worst stat as while she does have a unique spin on the "Energetic, kind quirky kid" archetype, her character isn't the most groundbreaking even if it blows other characters in her archetype out of the water.

Dynamics : S, this ties with execution as her best state for obvious reasons. From Lumity, to her parent relationship with Eda, to her sibling relationship with King and Hunter, and her duels of wit against Belos, Luz has some of the best character dynamics in animated fiction.

Conclusion: A, it might not be groundbreaking but, Luz had a pretty great conclusion that tied up her character arc and left the door open for future adventures.

So overall, I would give Luz a character an A to A+ ranking.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 6 days ago

When should I expect to get my Bevo refund in the mail.

Hello friends, I recently realized that Bevp pay would be shutting down a few days ago, so I sent a Bevo refund request.

Now I don't think I have a bank account tied to the school, so I should get the money back via mail at my addresses.

So, my question is, since I sent the refund request a few days ago, how long should I expect it to take for the money to be sent to me, and who should I go to if I don't get the refunded cash.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 7 days ago
▲ 59 r/JujutsuPowerScaling+1 crossposts

Fuga isn't even a good attack in its base form; Sukuna needed to use binding vows to make it actually effective.

Sukunas Fuga isn't deadly because the attack is OP; it's deadly because Sukuna modified it with binding vows that turned it into a massive, hard to avoid, AOE with the power of a nuke by imbuing the dust created by his domain with explosive Cursed Energy.

Base Fuga did end Jogo but Sukuna kind of tricked Jogo into trying to overpower it head on instead of dodging it by playing to the curses Ego.

While Yuji might have Base Fuga, it would probably be the least effective tool in his arsenal given Denji is already alot faster than the people Sukuna considered normal Fuga too slow to be effective against.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 11 days ago

How do you think the "Hell Caste system" issue will end.

To be frank I severely doubt a random lowborn imp and a disgraced former Goetia would be able to challenge the 7 deadly sins and the Ares Goetia even if they might have some tepid words of support from people like Asmodeus, but Bee didn't exactly raise her voice to the other Sins putting Hellhounds at the bottom of the totem pole so I doubt she will now.

Plus Helluva Boss is mostly about Blitz and his relationship with other people, so I think the story would probably end with a big personal victory for Blitz, finally having a level of respect in Hell, married to Stolas, and Octavia on speaking terms even if she has her own life as a Princess of the Ares Goetia now.

Some say Lucifer or Lilith coming back into their role as rulers would solve that issue, but I severely doubt it given it was their time as active rulers that created the caste system (which Satan just enforces in their absence) as telling by the fact they put their most beloved groups (The Goetia for Lucifer and Sinners for Lilith) above everyone but themselves and the other Sins. Neither Lucifer nor Lilith are going to care about the plight of some firetoads, they didn't 10,000 years ago when building Hell (Lucifer created the Goetia and his court absence is seen as something that wasn't always the case given, he had a throne)

So that probably leaves Charlie; while she is very ignorant to the suffering of the lower classes of hell, and may or may not have some slight "stolas-level" unconscious prejudice given her upbringing (we don't know for certain yet), but she is easily the most sympathetic of the Royal Family and the most easily swayed by seeing people suffer.

Given their is set to be a crossover between Helluva and Hazbin, I could see Charlie slowly starting to realize that the system her mother and father created .... is kind of awful, and that could be a long and slow arc that eventually culminates in her trying to get her parents to try to end the caste system they created.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 12 days ago
▲ 16 r/swtor

In Masters Enigma, the developers have created a major rift between the factions heads of the Empire and Republic, and the Pub/Imp Alliance Commander. The Empire/Republic pretty much invade the Commanders home base, put the commander under house arrest, and steal a powerful artifact from them. This is not some petty disagreement but a major breach of perceived trust that hasn't really been seen since Iokath.

Now there are 3 main ways for this to end, more are less.

  1. Status Quo Antebellum: The Empire/Republic sees that they were foolish to doubt you after you bring them the body of Malgus; they remove they fleet from Odessen, give their apologizes for doubting you, and maybe even give you a new title to bribe you off. This is the safest option and won't change things up too much.
  2. Jadus just kills everyone: In this scenario, the conflict between the Alliance and the players home factions won't matter as Jadus will simply kill the heads of the Empire and Republic, thus negating any potential conflict they would have. This could lead into a prolonged power vacuum and force the players to ensure a puppet of Jadus doesn't end up leading the Republic or Empire.
  3. War with the Empire and Republic: This is the most drastic option and would see the player character attack the Empire and Republic and force them off Odessen by force, probably by capturing the Chancellor or Emperor/Empresses and forcing them to come to favorable terms. This is the most drastic option and would see the Alliance resolidify itself as a major faction in its own right.

So, which of these 3 options do you want to see happen, or do you think there is another 4th or 5th options I forgot to mention

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 20 days ago
▲ 36 r/swtor

Now one of the things that people loved about post KOTET content was how many choices you hand to affect the state of the galaxy, most notably by killing high ranking individuals like Darth Acina, Darth Vownrawn, Darth Shaar, Darth Savik, and Darth Anathel

The issues with those choices, however, is that now the game can't really DO anything with all those "fate uncertain" characters since now it's unclear if they are even alive in a specific playthrough.

This means you can't really have MOST of the Dark Council be in the spotlight and have interesting character development based on their personality since the exact configuration of the Dark Council wildly differs.

Now here is a simple way to solve that issue; have the Dark Council get wiped out and replaced by new Sith that the developers have complete freedom to develop as major players.

The way they can do this for Imperial Players is simple; the Empire is acting increasingly suspicious of Imperius/Wrath, and there is still the lingering saboteur plot thread that needs to be tied up.

It could simply be written that the saboteurs are found out, and the loyalists are framed (not difficult given how wary the Dark Council seems to be of Wrath/Imperius).

This could lead to a massive "War with the Dark Council" Flashpoint where the Outlander could clear house with the Dark Council and replace them with more "respectful" Sith.

If Jadus is going to win in 7.9 (which is likely) then Darth Nuls holocron is going to create many new Sith that would be able to rise through the ranks over the course of the 8.0 Expansion, and you can even bring back whatever old Sith haven't been killed off (Please stop killing off our quest givers)

Now I know that the Imperial player will never be able to become Empress/Emperor themselves, but a nice middle ground would be allowing them to put a puppet on the Imperial Throne to do all the busy work of managing the Sith Empire while the Imperial character crushes the enemies of the Sith in person.

You could also pull a WOW, and remove the position of Emperor entirely, with it being replaced by a small Dark Council consisting of the Imperial player and various Sith that sided with them in their coup.

I think these routes would go along way into streamlining the story for developments sake and giving Imperial players a bit more of that power fantasy that they have been craving after the disrespect they suffered in Masters Enigma.

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u/BackgroundRich7614 — 21 days ago

I mixed and matched many low-ish level amours and used color unifier in order to make it blend in. I think it looks durable while not being bulky.

u/BackgroundRich7614 — 24 days ago