Just finished the anime and I have questions
I binged the hell out of this series in two days. Didn’t like the idea at first, but halfway through episode one I was committed and it had a stranglehold on me.
That being said, I did have some plot and writing questions for fans of this series
Is the manga done better than the anime? I thought the directing and production of the anime was fantastic. But I felt the writing was a mess. I don’t know what else to describe this so please bear with me: it felt like there was no texture to the emotional journey. As soon as Akari showed interest in Jiro for the first time; it felt like there was a lack of proper transitions. A better way to say it is it felt like the anime had a set of events that had to happen and we were just connecting those events. For example; imagine 2 tsundere that acts like less of a tsundere and one acts more. I’m not saying play the trope. I’m saying commit to the thing you’re doing.
One example of this scene in this series was what they were hiding in the shed under the stairs on the beach. You know the seed is going from something erotic to something emotional to Jiro drawing back a little bit because of something Akari said. And somewhat on repeat. I felt that there just was not enough distinction between those moments. And to me that’s a writing issue. Thats just one example.
I’d also like to add there were times where I got some ‘School Days’ ptsd.
Finally please spoil this for me. Do Akari and Jiro end up together?