u/Gabry4777

Hello brothers a friend of mine wants to start night lords but doesn’t know how to put together a list. Is good if I suggest something like this (we mainly play casually and friendly in our group)?
Any suggestion is welcome and really appreciated

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+ FACTION KEYWORD: Chaos - Chaos Space Marines
+ DETACHMENT: Nightmare Hunt (Terror Made Manifest)
+ TOTAL ARMY POINTS: 1980pts
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+ WARLORD: Char3: Heretic Astartes Daemon Prince with wings
+ ENHANCEMENT: Sorrowscent Vulture (on Char1: Chaos Lord with Jump Pack)
& Greyveil Hex (on Char2: Chaos Lord with Jump Pack)
& Terrorglut Parasite (on Char3: Heretic Astartes Daemon Prince with wings)
+ NUMBER OF UNITS: 11
+ SECONDARY: - Bring It Down: (1x2) + (3x4) - Assassination: 3 Characters
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Char1: 1x Chaos Lord with Jump Pack (115 pts): Twin lightning claws
Enhancement: Sorrowscent Vulture (+35 pts)
Char2: 1x Chaos Lord with Jump Pack (105 pts): Twin lightning claws
Enhancement: Greyveil Hex (+25 pts)
Char3: 1x Heretic Astartes Daemon Prince with wings (200 pts): Warlord, Mark of Khorne, Hellforged weapons, Infernal cannon
Enhancement: Terrorglut Parasite (+20 pts)

5x Legionaries (90 pts)
• 4x Legionary
2 with Astartes chainsword, Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Heavy melee weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Meltagun
• 1x Aspiring Champion: Close combat weapon, Bolt pistol, Heavy melee weapon
5x Legionaries (90 pts)
• 4x Legionary
2 with Astartes chainsword, Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Heavy melee weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Meltagun
• 1x Aspiring Champion: Close combat weapon, Bolt pistol, Heavy melee weapon
5x Legionaries (90 pts)
• 4x Legionary
2 with Astartes chainsword, Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Heavy melee weapon
1 with Bolt pistol, Close combat weapon, Meltagun
• 1x Aspiring Champion: Close combat weapon, Bolt pistol, Heavy melee weapon

1x Defiler (250 pts): Ectoplasma destructor, 2x Magma cutter, Hades lascannon, Hades lascannon, Shearing claws
1x Defiler (250 pts): Ectoplasma destructor, 2x Magma cutter, Hades lascannon, Hades lascannon, Shearing claws
1x Defiler (250 pts): Hades battle cannon, 2x Excruciator cannon, Heavy reaper autocannon, Heavy reaper autocannon, Shearing claws
10x Warp Talons (270 pts)
• 9x Warp Talon: 9 with Warp claws
• 1x Warp Talon Champion: Warp claws
10x Warp Talons (270 pts)
• 9x Warp Talon: 9 with Warp claws
• 1x Warp Talon Champion: Warp claws

Hello brothers and sisters, I was starting to feel the need to start a blood angels army for 11th after I finish my homebrew. Would this list be a good starting point (mainly to have fun with friends) with future tuning or it’s completely stupid?

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+ FACTION KEYWORD: Imperium - Adeptus Astartes - Blood Angels
+ DETACHMENT: Angelic Inheritors (Legacy of the Angel)
+ TOTAL ARMY POINTS: 1980pts
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+ WARLORD: Char2: Commander Dante
+ ENHANCEMENT: Ordained Sacrifice (on Char4: Captain with Jump Pack)
& Troubling Visions (on Char5: Captain with Jump Pack)
+ NUMBER OF UNITS: 13
+ SECONDARY: - Bring It Down: (3x2) - Assassination: 5 Characters
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Char4: 1x Captain with Jump Pack (100 pts): Relic Shield, Thunder Hammer
Enhancement: Ordained Sacrifice (+25 pts)
Char5: 1x Captain with Jump Pack (90 pts): Astartes Chainsword, Heavy Bolt Pistol, Relic Shield
Enhancement: Troubling Visions (+15 pts)
Char1: 1x Chief Librarian Mephiston (120 pts): Fury of the Ancients, Plasma pistol, Vitarus
Char2: 1x Commander Dante (120 pts): Warlord, Perdition, The Axe Mortalis
Char3: 1x The Sanguinor (130 pts): Encarmine Broadsword

5x Intercessor Squad (80 pts)
• 4x Intercessor
3 with Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Close combat weapon
1 with Astartes grenade launcher, Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Close combat weapon
• 1x Intercessor Sergeant: Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Power fist
5x Intercessor Squad (80 pts)
• 4x Intercessor
3 with Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Close combat weapon
1 with Astartes grenade launcher, Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Close combat weapon
• 1x Intercessor Sergeant: Bolt pistol, Bolt Rifle, Power fist

1x Brutalis Dreadnought (160 pts): Twin Icarus ironhail heavy stubber, Brutalis Talons, Twin multi-melta
1x Brutalis Dreadnought (160 pts): Twin Icarus ironhail heavy stubber, Brutalis Talons, Twin multi-melta
1x Gladiator Lancer (160 pts): Armoured Hull, Icarus Rocket Pod, Ironhail Heavy Stubber, Lancer Laser Destroyer, 2x Fragstorm grenade launcher
6x Sanguinary Guard (260 pts)
2 with Encarmine Blade, Inferno Pistol
3 with Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun
1 with Sanguinary Banner, Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun
6x Sanguinary Guard (260 pts)
2 with Encarmine Blade, Inferno Pistol
3 with Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun
1 with Sanguinary Banner, Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun
6x Sanguinary Guard (260 pts)
2 with Encarmine Blade, Inferno Pistol
3 with Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun
1 with Sanguinary Banner, Encarmine Blade, Angelus Boltgun