u/Its-Akshum

Title: Chaledda

Format: Short Film

Page Count: 14

Genre: Folk Horror

Language: Hinglish[Hindi+English+English translation for some Hindi Dialogue]

Synopsis: You're walking alone at night; suddenly, you hear a familiar voice calling your name. WILL YOU TURN BACK?

NOTE: I'm looking for a detailed review for the Prologue. I know it's a little long, but it's done to establish the character dynamics clearly and to ease the viewer into the world.
If possible, please include a rating on a scale of 1 to 10 along with your feedback.

Title: Clearly Totally Obviously Not A Serial Killer

Format: Short Film

Page Count: 3

Genre: Absurdist Dark Comedy

Language: English

Synopsis: It's easy to hide your true identity when people around you are ignorant.

NOTE: I'm yet to come up with the name for the main character, but how does this opening look?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-uV76deeU2HMo5SDK9c7iLALrK94VQQF/view?usp=drive_link

Title: Clearly Totally Obviously Not A Serial Killer

Format: Short Film

Page Count: 3

Genre: Absurdist Dark Comedy

Language: English

Synopsis: It's easy to hide your true identity when people around you are ignorant.

NOTE: I'm yet to come up with the name for the main charecter but how does this opening look?

Based on your recommendations, I just copyrighted my screenplay and also made the drive link public so that you guys can read it and provide feedback on the script.

I just completed my first ever screenplay and would love to get some honest feedback on it. I have written it as a pitch black, no holds bar absurdist comedy, which means it might be off-putting to some readers, but I was not sure if I should mark the whole post as NSFW. I know the names used seem on the nose and will change them if the feedback suggests that I should.

Also, since it is set in India, some of the dialogues use Hinglish(A localized blend of Hindi and English), which might alienate non-Hindi readers but even if you don't speak hindi, you will be able to grasp most of the context.

LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oPZgDDplKSXf3_LAxJK7w7yA6DhCAI9f/view?usp=drive_link

Title: The Method Actor

Format: Short Film

Pages: 26

Genre: Satire, Dark Comedy, Mockumentary, Absurdist Comedy

Language: Hinglish [Hindi+English]

Synopsis: A mockumentary retrospectively capturing the hijacking of a movie's production by a narcissistic method actor.

What I'm looking for:

Feedback on the overall structure of the screenplay.

Feedback on the name of the lead character(Is it too on the nose)

Feedback on the plotlines (I've tried to sum everything up, but if there are any plotholes do clarify)

I am against the use of AI in filmmaking or art forms, but I did use Grammarly to check and correct some of my grammatical/spelling errors, and I hope that does not affect the artistic integrity of my script.

Thanks for giving my script a shot hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

[I'm sorry the link I shared yesterday was not public but this time I have made sure that it is] I just completed and copyrighted my first ever screenplay and would love to get some honest feedback on it. I have written it as a pitch black, no holds bar absurdist comedy, which means it might be off-putting to some readers, but I was not sure if I should mark the whole post as NSFW. I know the names used seem on the nose and will change them if the feedback suggests that I should.

Also, since it is set in India, some of the dialogues use Hinglish(A localized blend of Hindi and English), which might alienate non-Hindi readers but even if you don't speak hindi, you will be able to grasp most of the context.

LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oPZgDDplKSXf3_LAxJK7w7yA6DhCAI9f/view?usp=drive_link

Title: The Method Actor

Format: Short Film

Pages: 26

Genre: Satire, Dark Comedy, Mockumentary, Absurdist Comedy

Language: Hinglish [Hindi+English]

Synopsis: A mockumentary retrospectively capturing the hijacking of a movie's production by a narcissistic method actor.

What I'm looking for:

Feedback on the overall structure of the screenplay.

Feedback on the name of the lead character(Is it too on the nose)

Feedback on the plotlines (I've tried to sum everything up, but if there are any plotholes do clarify)

I am against the use of AI in filmmaking or art forms, but I did use Grammarly to check and correct some of my grammatical/spelling errors, and I hope that does not affect the artistic integrity of my script.

Thanks for giving my script a shot hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/168XZRvQQoJI85vV2W2bFAKpYJS7H92y4/view?usp=drive_link

I just completed my first ever screenplay and would love to get some honest feedback on it. I have written it as a pitch black, no holds bar absurdist comedy, which means it might be off-putting to some readers, but I was not sure if I should mark the whole post as NSFW. I know the names used seem on the nose and will change them if the feedback suggests that I should.

Also, since the story is set in India, the language used for some of the dialogues is Hinglish (A localized blend of Hindi and English), but even if you are not a native Hindi speaker, you might be able to understand the overall context for most of the script.

Title: The Method Actor

Format: Short Film

Pages: 26

Genre: Satire, Dark Comedy, Mockumentary, Absurdist Comedy

Language: Hinglish [Hindi+English]

Logline: A mockumentary retrospectively capturing the hijacking of a movie's production by a narcissistic method actor.

What I'm looking for:

1. Feedback on the overall structure of the screenplay.
2. Feedback on the name of the lead character(Is it too on the nose)
3. Feedback on the plotlines (I've tried to sum everything up, but if there are any plotholes do clarify)

Thanks for giving my script a shot hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/168XZRvQQoJI85vV2W2bFAKpYJS7H92y4/view?usp=drive_link

I just completed my first ever screenplay and would love to get some honest feedback on it. I have written it as a pitch black, no holds bar absurdist comedy, which means it might be off-putting to some readers, but I was not sure if I should mark the whole post as NSFW. I know the names used seem on the nose and will change them if the feedback suggests that I should.

Also, since the story is set in India, the language used for some of the dialogues is Hinglish (A localized blend of Hindi and English), but even if you are not a native Hindi speaker, you might be able to understand the overall context for most of the script.

Title: The Method Actor

Format: Short Film

Page Count: 26

Genre: Satire, Dark Comedy, Mockumentary, Absurdist Comedy

Language: Hinglish [Hindi+English]

Logline: A mockumentary retrospectively capturing the hijacking of a movie's production by a narcissistic method actor.

What I'm looking for:

1. Feedback on the overall structure of the screenplay.
2. Feedback on the name of the lead character(Is it too on the nose)
3. Feedback on the plotlines (I've tried to sum everything up, but if there are any plotholes do clarify)

Thanks for giving my script a shot hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

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I just completed my first ever screenplay and would love to get some honest feedback on it. I have written it as a pitch black, no holds bar absurdist comedy, which means it might be off-putting to some readers, but I was not sure if I should mark the whole post as NSFW. I know the names used seem on the nose and will change them if the feedback suggests that I should.

Also, since the story is set in India, the language used for some of the dialogues is Hinglish (A localized blend of Hindi and English), but even if you are not a native Hindi speaker, you might be able to understand the overall context for most of the script.

Title: The Method Actor

Format: Short Film

Pages: 26

Genre: Satire, Dark Comedy, Mockumentary, Absurdist Comedy

Language: Hinglish [Hindi+English]

Logline: A mockumentary retrospectively capturing the hijacking of a movie's production by a narcissistic method actor.

What I'm looking for:

1. Feedback on the overall structure of the screenplay.

2. Feedback on the name of the lead character(Is it too on the nose)

3. Feedback on the plotlines (I've tried to sum everything up, but if there are any plotholes do clarify)

Thanks for giving my script a shot hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.