Thoughts on my Goon?
(NOTICE: no more comments about the title place, I didn't know and can't edit -.-;)
So the main antagonist for the first arc of my PMD series is an Obstagoon, whom I affectionately nicknamed Goon (note that in keeping with the canon PMD and Pokepark games, all of my characters are referred to only by their species and, for the most part, are the only members of their species that we see), and I’ve always wondered how he’d be seen by fans
Story for him is that he was once a little Galatians Zigzagoon living a rough life out in the wild. Nobody would ever help him, villagers would drive him away, and some people would even attack him, all because he was a wild mon and due to his species’ reputation
But then one day he met a Flaaffy who dedicated their life to helping others. They were the first person to treat him kindly and the two of them formed a rescue team together
Unfortunately they eventually had a falling out, as while Flaaffy wanted to help everybody and believed that Goon would be the same way after knowing firsthand what it’s like to not be helped, Goon came to feel like they were just using him and didn’t actually care about him (it’s just a misunderstanding really)
After the two broke off Flaaffy would become an Ampharos, a guild master, and the leader of his village, fulfilling his lifelong dream, while Goon became bitter, envious, and resentful, eventually forming his own band of outlaws and outcasts dedicated to destroying everything Ampharos worked so hard to build
While Ampharos believes Goon to be a lost cause, the protagonist of my series, a naive young Eevee, being the all-loving hero that they are, believes that he’s just lashing out because he’s hurt
I’ve always wondered who the audience might agree more with, and whether or not there find Goon sympathetic. Either way I always felt like he’s one of my best written characters and is one of my favorites because of it
Also, being an Obstagoon, he’s naturally a singer, expressing his pain and rallying his army through his songs (writing songs is *way* beyond my ability but I do know a couple that I thought would fit him)
As one last detail, I’ve thought about making him into a girl more than a few times 😅 Doesn’t really add or change anything, but I feel like it might help him stand out more as an antagonist (also has some fun implications as well. Ampharos is gay, so imagine Goon was in love with him only to realize that he’s incapable of loving them back, and ends up feeling hurt and betrayed by this, especially if Flaaffy didn’t word it right [ie, “I don’t love you that way…” vs “I’m into guys…”, but either way she would’ve opened up her heart for the first time, to someone she felt truly cared about her, only to be rejected by them, and that’s gotta hurt no matter what])
But what do you think? Did I do a good job at writing an interesting character, or is it hot garbage like I always feared? 😅(/j mostly, I still love this project of mine even if I have doubts at times, and feel like it does have a lot of potential)