



How can I improve her? I feel like something is wrong.
None of the cultural attire's designs are set in stone, so I can change them as much as I want to fit the design.
Also, it doesn't read, but that is a pleated loose short, not a skirt.
This is a modern Fantasy world, and three of the things she's wearing are cultural attire from her city: the white shirt with delicate long sleeves are a symbol that she's higher class, since she doesn't need to do manual work. The socks are a family thing, and the fake additive braids are often given to you by parents at 16.
Her name is Kei: in the first part of the design (age 17 or 18) she's mostly the typical rule follower, wants to honour her family and she's quite naive. She's forced into becoming an adventurer by circumstance, and the most she does to protect herself from the danger is the black shirt you see underneath, as it's a type of armour. Otherwise, she refuses to separate herself from the hair extensions that can be a major issue in battle, wants to keep the shirt no matter how impractical, and same for the socks.
Then, in the second design, she's supposed to look more mature, as she's 3 years older. She's rebelled a bit, and is trying to use fashion as a way to express herself more, without forgetting her origins. She is far from having figured herself out, so the makeup is meant to look more experimental than anything else. Her hair was cut in battle, taking the hair extensions she cared a lot about with it. No one in the crew knows how to cut hair, so it's meant to look messy. She kept what used to be circles, and turned them into the triangle earrings.
She'll also have a backpack in the final design.
Also, I'm using "Kei" as a placeholder name, so if you have any better ideas, please, tell me!