▲ 5 r/YAlit

I’m reading Shadowhunters for the first time, and I have a problem with the characters' ages.

Im halfway through the first book and enjoying the world-building. However, I find it incredibly hard to believe or picture these characters as 15- or 16-year-old teenagers. The only one who actually seems like one is Simon, but that’s more down to his archetype than his age.

It’s not that I think they’re bad characters, but nothing about them suggests they’re young, aside from the occasional mention of their age. They come across more like adults in their early twenties.

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u/Pollotelokote — 8 days ago

I had already written 124 words of my novel when I realized I didn't have a good photo of myself to use for the "About the Author" section of the cover. What advice can you give me for taking this photo?

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u/Pollotelokote — 13 days ago
▲ 62 r/Cosmere

I always believed that Skyeels were imbued with power, and that was why they could fly. I think I misunderstood.

u/Pollotelokote — 16 days ago

Mi proceso creativo es ver una hoja en blanco durante 4 horas y luego escribir 400-600 palabras en 20 minutos.

¿Cuál es el tuyo?

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u/Pollotelokote — 23 days ago

¿Cómo lidiar con el brainrot de las audiencias modernas?

Una de las nuevas tendencias es que si la primera página no te engancha o no te muestra a donde va la trama entonces entonces dejan de leer.

Solo he visto estas criticas en internet por lo que podría ser solo una cámara de eco. Pero de todas formas lo he visto lo suficiente como para plantearme esto.

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u/Pollotelokote — 1 month ago

A monk has something that let him move more after using ki. Can he use action attack, kill enemy, expend bonus and ki to flurry, use the extra movement and then use the attacks from flurry?

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u/Pollotelokote — 1 month ago
▲ 24 r/writers

Ready for Writember, my goal is to write 40k words... So, around 1,333 words a day on average. It won't be easy but it's my second draft, so I'm not starting from scratch, either.

u/Pollotelokote — 1 month ago

I’ve always found it funny how completely oblivious people are to what happens when magical girls spring into action. Whether they fall asleep, get hypnotized, or end up under mind control, they simply go on with their day as if nothing had happened.

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u/Pollotelokote — 1 month ago

For those who self-publish, what was your best marketing tool? I’m thinking about paying for ads on Facebook and maybe Reddit, as well as sending copies to a few influencers in the hope that one of them might do a review.

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago

For those who self-publish, what was your best marketing tool? I’m thinking about paying for ads on Facebook and maybe Reddit, as well as sending copies to a few influencers in the hope that one of them might do a review.

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago
▲ 40 r/writers

How many of you are writing books that started as fanfiction? where you stopped and asked yourselves, "What if I turned this into my own original story?"

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago

Villains in magical girl stories? Honestly, I’ve always felt they’re all a bit generic partly because the focus of these stories is on the girls and their relationships, while the villains serve merely as a source of motivation. Do you have a favorite that really stood out?

u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago
▲ 29 r/writers

Sometimes I feel stupid for trying so hard to ensure everything I write is logical and coherent and then i see people in reviews defending plot holes in other works with arguments like "There are dragons, and what bother you is them traveling halfway across the kingdom on foot in a day?

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago

A Young Adult or adult urban fantasy book about a young character who enters a new world of magic or supernatural powers?

I know there are plenty out there, which is why I’m asking for recommendations.

I’m looking for something where the character is living a normal life, then suddenly gets drawn into the supernatural and has to learn to use powers or magic to help out. Bonus points if there’s a bit of romance to spice things up.

I’ve only read *Harry Potter* and *Percy Jackson* and I suppose *Mistborn* falls into this category too, but I’m looking for something in between: not as juvenile as the early *Percy Jackson* books, but not as grim as *Mistborn*.

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago

Can someone please explain how tf high school works in USA?

I think it is simple:

Elementary school

Middle school

And then High school

But I keep hearing different terms in TV shows that confuse me.

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago
▲ 51 r/Cosmere

I was bored, so I started creating a fan-made magic system using Investiture. What do you think?

The core idea of this magic system is that users must expose themselves to either sunlight or moonlight. By absorbing the light through their skin, they can store it and use it to fuel their powers. They can save it for later, but storage capacity is very limited, so each Luminari is particularly vulnerable when their light source is not in the sky.

I’m not sure which Shard would have created this powers... perhaps Cultivation, if she had her own planet.

And as a final touch, I added an artificial light created by the planet's scientists that, when consumed by either group, replaces their abilities with magnetism and electricity, which are extremely powerful.

by Me

u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago
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For me, writing the moment a character learns about magic in a fantasy story is very difficult. What advice can you give me to make these reactions feel natural?

Whether it’s a character discovering they have magical abilities. Discovering the existence of another world and monsters. Or a secondary character finding out the protagonist has superpowers...

From what I’ve seen, I tend to have them accept this new information too quickly.

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u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago

What do you think about the love interests in Magical Girls stories? Do you like having them included, or do you feel they get in the way?

u/Pollotelokote — 2 months ago