u/Quirky-Pop9608

Wrote a song called funeral [Lyrics]

I wrote this song, super dramatic, but I want your feedback! It's called funeral.

The church is almost empty, but it's just m'y funeral

I saved all of the seats, but no one came as usual

The priest promised it would be quick

A couple's getting married right after me

The organ player barely rehearsed his songs anyway

And they crooked my finger closing the casket

They couldn't hear me scream, busy talking

Trying to remember why they even came here

They didn't have to be here

They didn't want to be here

They couldn't even be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral?

They didn't have to be here

They couldn't wait to get out of here

It's a bit cold in the cemetery

No one's here to keep me company

Someone's phone rang during the ceremony

And it caught everyone's attention instead of the burying

And it rained so much people left a bit early

Made plans after it, knowing they didn't have to be here

They mispelled my name on my stone

But they didn't want to waste money on another one

And the flowers are already dying

An aunt just took them from her neighbour's garden

They didn't have to be here

They didn't want to be here

They couldn't even be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral?

They didn't have to be here

They couldn't wait to get out of here

It's a bit cold in the cemetery

No one's here to keep me company

A year has passed but I don't think they've noticed

My name left all the conversations the next morning

And I've heard it's someone else's turn, but there's something weird

They're all crying, but they didn't do it for me

And now they want to be here

They have to be here

They really wanted to be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral ?

They don't even have to be here

Yet it's all they're speaking

About, in this now crowded cemetery

And yet my stone's still empty

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u/Quirky-Pop9608 — 4 days ago

Need feedback on these lyrics!

I wrote this song, super dramatic, but I want your feedback! It's called funeral.

The church is almost empty, but it's just m'y funeral

I saved all of the seats, but no one came as usual

The priest promised it would be quick

A couple's getting married right after me

The organ player barely rehearsed his songs anyway

And they crooked my finger closing the casket

They couldn't hear me scream, busy talking

Trying to remember why they even came here

They didn't have to be here

They didn't want to be here

They couldn't even be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral?

They didn't have to be here

They couldn't wait to get out of here

It's a bit cold in the cemetery

No one's here to keep me company

Someone's phone rang during the ceremony

And it caught everyone's attention instead of the burying

And it rained so much people left a bit early

Made plans after it, knowing they didn't have to be here

They mispelled my name on my stone

But they didn't want to waste money on another one

And the flowers are already dying

An aunt just took them from her neighbour's garden

They didn't have to be here

They didn't want to be here

They couldn't even be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral?

They didn't have to be here

They couldn't wait to get out of here

It's a bit cold in the cemetery

No one's here to keep me company

A year has passed but I don't think they've noticed

My name left all the conversations the next morning

And I've heard it's someone else's turn, but there's something weird

They're all crying, but they didn't do it for me

And now they want to be here

They have to be here

They really wanted to be here

Why wouldn't they come

To my first and only funeral ?

They don't even have to be here

Yet it's all they're speaking

About, in this now crowded cemetery

And yet my stone's still empty

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u/Quirky-Pop9608 — 4 days ago

Vue sexuelle mourante

Je suis avec mon copain depuis 4 ans et depuis quelques temps il y a une problématique qui est récurrente et je sais pas trop comment faire. Je tiens à préciser qu'on a emménagé ensemble il y a 1 an mais qu'il y avait déjà des prémices de ça avant donc je suis pas sûre que c'est la cause.

Notre vie sexuelle est... Mourante. Tout le reste autour est génial: il est le meilleur copain du monde, il m'aime je le sais je le vois dans ses actions, ça n'est pas du tout ça que je remet en question. Mais il n'y a plus grand chose d'excitant de ce côté là. Attention je ne dis pas que la routine est négative, j'aime la routine.

Mais voilà vie sexuelle au point mort (on n'a que 22ans...). On ne s'embrasse même plus langoureusement. Alors je lui en ai déjà parlé mais à chaque fois c'est le même résultat. Il n'a juste pas envie, pas d'autres explications et après il m'avoue ressentir une pression si j'insiste trop. Alors je suis tiraillée entre continuer d'essayer de le séduire, j'avais même acheté de la lingerie pour, ou ne plus tenter au risque d'attendre je ne sais pas combien de temps. Donc quoi faire ?

PS : non il ne me trompe pas et non la rupture n'est pas une réponse à tout.

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u/Quirky-Pop9608 — 5 days ago

Je suis admissible au Capes d'histoire géo et je dois donc faire mes voeux sur la plateforme SIAL dès demain.

Quelles sont les choses à ABSOLUMENT savoir ?

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u/Quirky-Pop9608 — 20 days ago