Thomas - The Adventure Begins - feature - 99 Pages
Title: Thomas - The Adventure Begins
Format: Live action/Animated
Page Length: 99
Genre: Family
Logline: A young tank engine who longs to see the world tries to prove his worth on the railway.
Feedback concerns:
I hope my attempts at historical accuracy are well-done.
Should I make it longer, give Thomas and Willie more depth?
Link: https://1 d r v. m s/b/c/3874012275918989/IQCnMVRgTu7mSbin08jGhnr9AaDQ_xLMb84Yupoa23hFAi8?e=JykpQP