
Îles d'Influence - The Tales of Euphoria
Pencil Sketch of Îles d'Influence 🍭👻
WIP for an 2D RPG.
Critiques Welcomed. Also, once it's sketched out, what is a good way to take this to the next level/digitise it?
Thanks 🫡

Pencil Sketch of Îles d'Influence 🍭👻
WIP for an 2D RPG.
Critiques Welcomed. Also, once it's sketched out, what is a good way to take this to the next level/digitise it?
Thanks 🫡
Colour me intrigued, I think some of you on here could do really well in the Creative Industries as writers and other various storyteller roles.
What are your end goals? Why are you worldbuilding? Do you want to become Industry Professionals and turn this into a career? And do you know how?
I'm a BA(Hons) Creative Writing Student at Anglia Ruskin University, Cambridge, UK.
I'll be working on an entry way into a PhD after graduating and also I'm starting my Career currently running an Independent Storytelling Studio with an Active IP.
So I ask this in both an Academic light for my research topic and as someone starting a Career.
Some of you have a lot of talent, but are you prepared to overcome the hurdles to reach a market? Or is it purely as a Hobby/Amateur?
Shoutout to the guy who posted about a worldbuilding challenge btw, was really eye opening about this subreddit :)
Hello everyone, happy to of found this subreddit.
I'm new to blogging overall, and I have a blog page on my online portfolio. Was hoping maybe someone might be able to give me feedback on the blog page. Been building this site since December.
I'm about to enter my 3rd year as a BA(Hons) Creative Writing student at ARU, Cambridge. I will be using this website to showcase my working Portfolio, Blog, Current Active IP, Industry Experience/CV etc.
Obviously I'm more here about the Blog Page. It might not to be to modern standards, also looking for other good blogs to research how they go about blogging, the use of space of the page etc.
Critiques welcomed :)
Let me tell you all a fable of the beauties and their beasts
Underneath the moonlight where they hold their midnight feasts
Of dances and the chances – of lives now long lost
Let us cry a fairy tale of preservation at any cost
Swaying through the trees
Through the water
Through the air
A threnody of cycles – let the lyrics take you there
And underneath it all
Those burning roots of raw desire
They all bloomed so beautiful – from the seeds that take them higher
And though we must be blind as we move towards Dystopia
Come, and sit a while, to hear –
The Tales of Euphoria.
[Poem on Tales of Euphoria, opening for a fantasy franchise]
Let me tell you all a fable of the beauties and their beasts
Underneath the moonlight where they hold their midnight feasts
Of dances and the chances – of lives now long lost
Let us cry a fairy tale of preservation at any cost
Swaying through the trees
Through the water
Through the air
A threnody of cycles – let the lyrics take you there
And underneath it all
Those burning roots of raw desire
They all bloomed so beautiful – from the seeds that take them higher
And though we must be blind as we move towards Dystopia
Come, and sit a while, to hear –
The Tales of Euphoria.
[Poem on Tales of Euphoria, opening for a fantasy franchise]
I'm hoping to get some feedback on a Story-Bible. But it would be a lot to post here and I wont send a link because I think it breaks the subs rules (Least that what is said).
But I've been working on a Fictional Psychedelic Fantasy. Started my writing portfolio and company website etc.
This is the Story Bible for 'Tales of Euphoria: Îles d’Influence'. It's a 2D RPG story bible for Video Game format. It has heavy themes of Drugs, Religion, Cults etc. It's first instalment of a Multiplatform Franchise.
I was just wondering if anyone here could/would give some feedback on its current progress for this specific title.
The 2D RPG is a meant to set the themes, tone and atmosphere of the series. Drawing audiences into the weird, wonderful and eccentric world of Euphoria.
It contains a Synopsis, Dossier, Infinitions, Stats & Attributes, Locations, Glossary, Preface, Level Design (& Script Plan), and Brand Style Guide.
Just wondering if people are interested in its themes and tone, general critiques etc.
There is more information on the website about the Franchise as a whole, the poetry, animation script, prose etc etc. But was just wondering about this document alone.
Reddit has a lot of rules and it's in PDF format, not sure how to show it.
Many thanks!
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Dunno if I can post this, I took a screenshot cause I didn't want to 'self-promote'.
But this is the Home Page of my online Portfolio.
Does this look interesting, does the Copy work? Do you get a feel for the style from the writing on the page? Critiques needed.
Tales of Euphoria: Like Flowers in Full Bloom
Chapter I
The Troupe D’ambroisie
Giant toadstools of red and purple towered above the troupe. An audience of gnomes & travellers began to silence as the makeshift stage darkened and a single sphere of light was gently released into the sky above by the enigmatic old man.
Beneath its gentle hue a woman lay centre stage – her hair of crimson swept in the cool breeze. The lids of her eyes a stark black. Pure green iris’s shone out towards the gathering crowd, reflecting the greenery of the canopy floor. To the side, the old man waved his wand over the plethora of stringless instruments strewn across the stage. Slowly, they began to strum, and drum, and hum. A sweet melody irradiated through the Mycelium Forest of the Gnomish peoples. And then, she began to sing.
The audience were in awe as she swung her arms over herself. Every flair of grace beckoned another second of watching. Butterflies landing among her gentle poise as she pirouetted across the stage. Her eyes glistened brighter and brighter as the movements increased, and from her chest – a kaleidoscope of colour intensified, leaving trails of translucent awe in her wake. But whilst she pranced, and unbeknownst to the audience… Her siblings began.
Transfixed upon the aethereal figure that darted across his line of vision. Morgaine was unaware that the performer’s associates had begun to ‘work’ the crowd. Two hooded figures hidden deep in the backdrop of the canopy began to cut purses, pick pockets, and steal any loose belongings left unattended by the occupied audience. Stealthily creeping from person to person with feverish intent. So bewitched were the audience, that none could astray their gaze.
As the song began to climax, the dancer gave one last twirl as flashes of light blinded the audience. And when the song had ended, and the lights faded, all that was left was a simple, word-down caravan. That creaked as the old man whipped his wand into the air and it began to shuttle away. The three performers stood atop the old wooden wagon – and bowed.
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If anyone hasn't seen their stuff check em out, makes me piss my sen laughing 🍭👻
Also could do with critiques, advice etc. I'm in East Anglia UK and want to get involved in shows and performing. I go to Uni in Cambridge so any locals hit me up :)
-PunkPandemonium!
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I'm a writer and also a singer.
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Was just wondering what people thought of this business card and my Wordpress Website design/content.
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Critiques welcomed.
Thanks!
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