u/guilherme-A001

Rumaging through old stuffs I found this evo line I made when I was a kid and I decided to do a redisign now that I'm older and a little better at drawing, never made a mega for it the most I found was the name "BraveMon", I'm still awful at color though

Anyway Lazardmon's "glitch" or a messed up code for lack of words He's not corrupted He's just bizzarre cause I remember wanting to make something that even the Digital world would look at and think "Dear god someone put that thing down"... I love him a lot

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Sorry still learning how to put faces in bodies without'em looking weird, maybe you guys could make'em in different poses or clothes? They're a couple and I'm gonna put'em as the protags of my future comic if that changes anything, those are not their suits I just couldn't think of anything for'em to wear so their stuck with gym clothes for now

OC LORE(in case you don't wanna know or if you need to know to draw), they're both heroes who hate their jobs and wanna spend more time with their kids(that want to be heroes despite their parents warnings), Leroy has total control over his own body (He controls his own mass, his soul, his height, what he is made of, his appearance, he's immune to alterations in his own existence, etc.) which sorta put's him in a "Dr. Manhattan situation" actively refusing to admit he's a god by telling himself He's a nomal guy, that people shouldn't be scared and are exaggerating his powers while he is constantly putting up walls for himself, Emma's Brazil number 1 hero she controls Hymenoptera (bees, wasps, hornets, etc.) – what they do, what they want, what they think, she can see through them, etc. She has semi-exoskeleton and one enormous stinger made of calcium in each wrist(sorta like Wolverine or an AC character). Since she's the Number 1 hero she keeps getting thrown into the more commercial part of heroic work having to rely mostly on bees cause they're easier to sell

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Sorry still learning how to put faces in bodies without'em looking weird, maybe you guys could make'em in different poses or clothes? They're a couple and I'm gonna put'em as the protags of my future comic if that changes anything, those are not their suits I just couldn't think of anything for'em to wear so their stuck with gym clothes for now

OC LORE(in case you don't wanna know or if you need to know to draw), they're both heroes who hate their jobs and wanna spend more time with their kids(that want to be heroes despite their parents warnings), Leroy has total control over his own body (He controls his own mass, his soul, his height, what he is made of, his appearance, he's immune to alterations in his own existence, etc.) which sorta put's him in a "Dr. Manhattan situation" actively refusing to admit he's a god by telling himself He's a nomal guy, that people shouldn't be scared and are exaggerating his powers while he is constantly putting up walls for himself, Emma's Brazil number 1 hero she controls Hymenoptera (bees, wasps, hornets, etc.) – what they do, what they want, what they think, she can see through them, etc. She has semi-exoskeleton and one enormous stinger made of calcium in each wrist(sorta like Wolverine or an AC character). Since she's the Number 1 hero she keeps getting thrown into the more commercial part of heroic work having to rely mostly on bees cause they're easier to sell

(Desculpe, ainda to aprendendo a colocar rostos em corpos sem que fiquem estranhos) talvez vocês pudessem fazê-los em poses diferentes? Eles são um casal e vou usá-los como protagonistas do meu quadrinho, se vcs precisarem saber ambos são heróis que odeiam o trabalho e querem passar mais tempo com os filhos. O Leroy tem controle total sobre o próprio corpo (ele controla sua massa, alma, altura, composição, aparência, é imune a alterações na própria existência, etc.), o que o coloca numa espécie de "situação tipo Dr. Manhattan" ele se recusa a admitir que é um deus, dizendo a si mesmo que as pessoas não deveriam ter medo e que estão exagerando sobre seus poderes. A Emma é a heroína número 1 do Brasil; ela controla himenópteros (abelhas, vespas, marimbondos, etc.) — o que fazem, o que querem, o que pensam, ela consegue ver através deles, etc. Ela possui um semi-exoesqueleto e um enorme ferrão de cálcio em cada pulso. Como é a heroína número 1, ela acaba sendo sempre empurrada para o lado mais comercial do trabalho heroico, tendo que depender principalmente das abelhas, já que elas são mais fáceis de vender.

Sorry I'm still new at this (a year is drawing still new right?) and recently I've been feeling that my style feels too "Already seen that before" y'know? I'm asking hoping for an honest answer again You don't need to pull any punches

Sorry still learning how to put faces in bodies without'em looking weird, maybe you guys could make'em in different poses? They're a couple and I'm gonna put'em as the protags of my future comic if that changes anything, they're both heroes who hate their jobs and wanna spend more time with their kids, Leroy He has total control over his own body (He controls his own mass, his soul, his height, what he is made of, his appearance, he's immune to alterations in his own existence, etc.) which sorta put's him in a "Dr. Manhattan situation" actively refusing to admit he's a god by telling himself that people shouldn't be scared and are exaggerating his powers, Emma's Brazil number 1 hero she controls Hymenoptera (bees, wasps, hornets, etc.) – what they do, what they want, what they think, she can see through them, etc. She has semi-exoskeleton and one enormous stinger made of calcium in each wrist. Since she's the Number 1 hero she keeps getting thrown into the more commercial part of heroic work having to rely mostly on bees cause they're easier to sell

Sorry still learning how to put faces in bodies without'em looking weird, maybe you guys could make'em in different poses? They're a couple and I'm gonna put'em as the protags of my future comic if that changes anything, they're both heroes who hate their jobs and wanna spend more time with their kids, Leroy He has total control over his own body (He controls his own mass, his soul, his height, what he is made of, his appearance, he's immune to alterations in his own existence, etc.) which sorta put's him in a "Dr. Manhattan situation" actively refusing to admit he's a god by telling himself that people shouldn't be scared and are exaggerating his powers, Emma's Brazil number 1 hero she controls Hymenoptera (bees, wasps, hornets, etc.) – what they do, what they want, what they think, she can see through them, etc. She has semi-exoskeleton and one enormous stinger made of calcium in each wrist. Since she's the Number 1 hero she keeps getting thrown into the more commercial part of heroic work having to rely mostly on bees cause they're easier to sell

Sorry still learning how to put faces in bodies without'em looking weird, maybe you guys could make'em different poses? They're a couple and I'm gonna put'em as the protags of my future story if that anything

First time doing this I'm looking for any critic, tip or feedback I can get

I spent almost 2 hours trying and failing to make one because my niece asked for it, then I gave up and made this one. If anyone has a method or video, please help.

Soo straight to the question How do I know when I'm no longer an Amateur Artist ? I'm asking because the anniversary of when I decided I wanted to become a comic Artist is getting pretty near and I don't wanna have spent the entire year trying and training to get better Just to have stayed an Amateur(I feel like most people agree with me on that one) I'm also sending some drawings I made so you can see both my progress and overall skill decide so you can by yourselves