Is this line making sense?

I made a song. this line is from the lyrics. Could you let me know if it makes sense, please?

മാമധുരമാ ഋതു തോറ്റുപോകുമാം

എന്റെ നെഞ്ചിലെ കോപ്പയിൽ സേമിയ പായസം

I am not looking for feedback on the creative writing part. Just tell me please if it makes sense grammatically.

That sweetest of seasons would pale in comparison

to the "semiya payasam" in the bowl held against my heart

- this is what I meant

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 18 hours ago

Need a lift: Bengaluru → Thrissur tonight

Hey everyone, I’m stuck in Bengaluru and need to get to thrissur (TCR) by morning tomorrow (Aug 15). I missed my last train and the remaining buses aren’t reachable from where I am.

If anyone is **driving from Bengaluru towards Thrissur/Kochi/Palakkad tonight** and has a spare seat, I’d be incredibly grateful for a lift. I’m happy to contribute towards fuel/tolls (I can manage up to ₹2,000).

I can meet you at a convenient pickup point in Bengaluru and get dropped anywhere around Thrissur.

Please DM me if you’re heading that way. 🙏

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 5 days ago

where can i find good relaxed fit embroidered shirts in bangalore?

Looking for a specific kind of men's shirt- relaxed/oversized fit, lightweight cotton, subtle scattered embroidery/motifs, but NOT ethnicwear. More contemporary/minimal/artsy menswear. any leads? dont have the time to order online and wait for delivery

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 6 days ago

Where can I get embroidered shirts in thrissur?

Does anyone know where I can buy embroidered shirts like this in thrissur? I dont have enough time to order online and wait for delivery. Any help is much appreciated

u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 8 days ago

What can a science guy bring to a film set?

I am 25M from Bengaluru. I come from a science background and currently work in science communication. But for a while now, I’ve been wanting to move deeper into filmmaking - not just making content about science, but actually making films where science is part of the story.

I’m especially interested in films that take real science, scientific ideas and theories seriously, rather than using pseudoscience as a shortcut for mystery. Films like Arrival, Interstellar, Contact, The Martian, Project hail mary and Gattaca are some of the kinds of films that make me excited about this topic because they are rooted in real science.

I’m still a generalist at this point. I’m figuring out whether my strongest place is directing, writing, cinematography, editing, producing, or some weird combination of all of them. What I do know is that I love telling stories, and I want to learn how films are actually made by working with people who are already doing it.

So this is honestly, a slightly desperate attempt to find my way into the filmmaking community. I don’t really have filmmaker friends or a filmmaking network yet, and I’m trying to change that.

If you’re a beginner like me, someone somewhere in the middle, or an experienced filmmaker who is interested in figuring out how to portray science clearly and accurately without sacrificing the aesthetics, emotion or narrative language of a film, I’d love to hear from you.

And I’m not limiting this to science. I’m happy to help with research, story development, writing, editing, production or simply be another person on the set who is willing to learn and do the work.

Right now, as a beginner, science is the one thing I can confidently bring to the table. So I’m starting there instead of pretending I have a filmmaking career I don’t have.

If you’re making something, learning something, or just looking for someone equally obsessed with stories, hit me up. I’d genuinely love to meet you

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 10 days ago
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eby - Thira

I wrote, composed, and produced this Malayalam song. It's about growing up and missing the state of mind I had as a child, when everything felt simpler and life wasn't weighed down by worries.

I'd love to know how u feel about this song. Any feedback on the songwriting, lyrics, or production would mean a lot. Because I am almost an absolute beginner.

Song link - https://youtu.be/pszFWZFHLUA?si=vooTlfjlZ5K2NXOb

u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 15 days ago
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Anyone going to Bengaluru from Mangalore today?

Hello, me and a friend of mine is stuck is mangalore railway station since last night. The bus we had booked and the train we hoped to take, both got canceled due to the rains. Is there anyone around who can pick us both from mangalore jn incase they are on the way to Bengaluru? Please DM. Any help would be much appreciated

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 18 days ago

Any producers here who love making original music?

Hey!

I'm from North Bengaluru. I write original songs in Malayalam and English, and I usually come up with the melodies too. I've never learned music professionally though, and I have no idea how to properly produce or arrange a song.

I'm wondering if there are any musicians, producers, or composers here who are as excited about making original music as I am. I'd love to find someone who's in it for the creative process and wants to build something from scratch.

I have a rough demo of one Malayalam song I made using BandLab loops. It's nowhere close to a finished track, but it should give you an idea of my songwriting and the kind of music I'm trying to make.

DM if interested

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 27 days ago

Any producers here who love making original music?

Helloo,

I'm from North Bengaluru. I write original songs in Malayalam and English, and I usually come up with the melodies too. I've never learned music professionally though, and I have no idea how to properly produce or arrange a song.

I'm wondering if there are any musicians, producers, or composers here who are as excited about making original music as I am. I'd love to find someone who's in it for the creative process and wants to build something from scratch.

I have a rough demo made using BandLab loops. It's far from a finished production, but it should give you an idea of my songwriting and melodies . DM if interested

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u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 27 days ago

Any producers here who love making original music?

Helloo,

I'm from North Bengaluru. I write original songs in Malayalam and English, and I usually come up with the melodies too. I've never learned music professionally though, and I have no idea how to properly produce or arrange a song.

I'm wondering if there are any musicians, producers, or composers here who are as excited about making original music as I am. I'd love to find someone who's in it for the creative process and wants to build something from scratch.

I've attached a rough demo made using BandLab loops. It's far from a finished production, but it should give you an idea of my songwriting and melodies - https://soundcloud.com/christeen-paulson/thira?si=ebb20a45eb1e4bbe9e450e9487b15842&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

If you like what you hear and think we'd vibe, feel free to DM me

u/Aggressive_Hand8047 — 27 days ago