This Machine Kills AI (Looking For Advice On Pre-Hook)

Would like to know your opinion, is the current line “Does it matter if the truss and walls shatter and fall” working in this?

Or would “what does it matter if the truss and walls shatter” work better, before “and we all end up dead in the end”?

It would follow the same melody as “if the pots too small fold it, dice loaded roll it” the line right before.

If what I got here sound good, vote “A” if the change then “B” please. Thanks yall.

u/HomerDoakQuarlesIII — 9 days ago

He stopped loving her today, George Jones my best take

Trying to sing like yourself and not the artist is you’re covering is one of the hardest things to do. Curious how I did, this was the best I’ve done so far, feedback welcome please. George is deceptively hard to sing.

u/HomerDoakQuarlesIII — 2 months ago

Will play this at a writers night in Nashville tonight

Very proud of where the song has ended up. “Warrior in the Garden”. Thanks for any comments, folks.

u/HomerDoakQuarlesIII — 2 months ago
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He Stopped Loving Her Today

George Jones Cover. Very Very proud of being able to sing and play this, hope it does justice.

u/HomerDoakQuarlesIII — 3 months ago