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[Critique] Excerpt/Chapter 1 of Dance of Thieves [Low Fantasy, 900 words)
This is a story I started over a year ago then shelved. I've come back to it after some time and started polishing some of the earlier sections.
In particular looking for critiques on the prose and whether it has captured your interest enough to keep reading? Also any other things you as a reader/writer find worthy to call out. I think I have a tendency to bog down 'in-the-moment' scenes with some exposition, trying to get better at that.
(Also seems there is a character requirement for posting and I guess google doc characters don't count, so just typing some more text to reach the 600 character limit.)