u/BUNIDOCHI

(just realized i accidentally drew page 5 for left to right reading- but just imagine its from right to left)

its gonna be short since im not sure if i can handle making a long comic yet, the app i used are jump paint and reason why im making this read from right to left is because im planning on publishing it on the manga plus creators app

i really want the first few pages of my comic to be able to get the reader a bit hooked or atleast not boring, is it working? are there problems with the way the panels are paced? im also trying to avoid making alot of heavy dialogue scenes since the core of this comic is about the longing for something and i think quiet panels would work better, but im open to any criticism

and yes this is a rough draft

(just realized i accidentally drew page 5 for left to right reading- but just imagine its from right to left)

its gonna be short since im not sure if i can handle making a long comic yet, the app i used are jump paint and reason why im making this read from right to left is because im planning on publishing it on the manga plus creators app

i really want the first few pages of my comic to be able to get the reader a bit hooked or atleast not boring, is it working? are there problems with the way the panels are paced? im also trying to avoid making alot of heavy dialogue scenes since the core of this comic is about the longing for something and i think quiet panels would work better, but im open to any criticism

and yes this is a rough draft

(just realized i accidentally drew page 5 for left to right reading- but just imagine its from right to left)

its gonna be short since im not sure if i can handle making a long comic yet, the app i used are jump paint and reason why im making this read from right to left is because im planning on publishing it on the manga plus creators app

i really want the first few pages of my comic to be able to get the reader a bit hooked or atleast not boring, is it working? are there problems with the way the panels are paced? im also trying to avoid making alot of heavy dialogue scenes since the core of this comic is about the longing for something and i think quiet panels would work better, but im open to any criticism

and yes this is a rough draft

i used a 3d model with premade poses as reference, specifically from posemy.art

im experiencing an issue where the poses feel stiff and i keep spending a lot of time just to make the poses feel "smooth" but still looking wrong, yet when i try to use real life references, i always cant find a grounded normal pose (its either very perspective heavy or dynamic)

im also confused about the advice of starting from real life references first or geometrical shapes first, cuz even though real life references can make your poses feel more fluid, it can also make your poses too wobbly or unstructured especially if your basic anatomy knowledge is unstable, the geometrical shapes on the other hand, can give you an easier time to draw structured poses, but it can also end up making your poses look rigid or stiff- i feel so stuck