Give me an honest review on my Fire Emblem: Three Houses SI-OC fanfiction, Life in a Medieval Fantasy World
The story is about 18 year old Jay Valentini. An ordinary person from our world as he is thrust into a world he only thought was fictional. Now instead of sitting through boring college lectures, he must sit through almost even more boring lectures at some military academy filled with commoners and nobles while trying to survive.
It is eight chapters in and is my first proper fanfiction, tell me what y'all think as I would love to hear your feedback.
Link to fanfiction:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/60561106