rate my hook?

Can someone DM me and I'll send my opening line for the Common App essay? 😭 idk its kind of embarrassing, so I don't want to send it outright over here

Thank you so much!

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 12 days ago

Chance me?

Weighted GPA: 4.377; unweighted is a 3.8, I think

SAT: 1500

Out-of-state applicant

Major: finance

ECS:

SINGING:
- Been going to singing classes once a week since I was five years old
- I won international competitions
- I sing for my temple's YouTube channel to raise funds for the temple
- I sing at the temple and for religious events
SANSKRIT SCHOOL:
- I went to Sanskrit school from age 6
- I took the credit exam and passed with 3 credits
- I now teach the language to the students at the same school I studied. I volunteer there as well once a week to give back to the community
FINANCIAL NONPROFIT INITIATIVE:

-made and sent a financial literacy presentation to over 500 foster care centers, schools, and more
- I have been doing this since the beginning of 11th grade
- I lead the development and delivery of financial literacy programming for student-athletes.
- I create educational content on topics such as budgeting, saving, investing, entrepreneurship, NIL opportunities, taxes, and personal finance.
- I develop social media content that promotes continuous learning and financial awareness among athletes.

FRENCH HONOR SOCIETY TREASURER:
- Went from French Club in 9th and 10th grade to French Honor Society Treasurer in 11th grade. Will apply for the role in 12th grade
- I manage the funds and society dues
- I handle the financial side of the honor society
ORCHESTRA:
- I have been in orchestra since 4th grade
- Was first chair in freshman year (the lead of the violins)
- Am currently in chamber orchestra since 10th grade
- I practice frequently at home
Member of clubs:
- I have been in FBLA, TSA, Science Olympiad, French club/honor society since 9th/10th grade.

STARBUCKS BARISTA

Thank you!

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 12 days ago

rising senior in high school

Hello!

Fordham is at the top of my list as a rising senior and aspiring finance major OOS, but I am worried that IFFF i get in...how will i afford it? I'm middle class but my parents also aren't willing to pay a whole lot and I don't want to take out too many loans. What are the chances I get merit aid? Do they give generous aid in general? What was your experience with that?

Also kinda random question- I know this is a Jesuit school, but my Common App essay centers around my Hindu-Buddhist faith and upbringing. Don't know if this is a stupid question, but it won't impact my chances of getting in, right?

Thank you.

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 14 days ago

Can someone explain nonduality to me SHORTLYY

I have adhd and dyslexia so I cannot follow the long ahh explanations on here😭😭could someone dumb it down for me pls thank u so much I’m new to all this

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 17 days ago

how do i make my dialogue into a hook for commonapp essay

im tryna make my hook a convo between my friend and I but idk how to do it without sounding stupid.

i could go like

friend:

me:

friend:

me:

friend:

me:

or like a conversation like in paragraph format like "I said. _________he replied. SO I said in definace ___________. ________was his only response" but that sounds bad i think? not sure

help pls. thank u

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 20 days ago

i gotta crush on jeffery

he fine asl im so happy every time the camera cuts to him like holy striking facial features

LOVE the other contestants too why is everyone so fine

edit: wait why r ppl hating im complimenting everyone 😭 evb so serious hold up nowww

edit2: OHHH YALL IM TALKING ABOUT JEFFREY FROM SEASON 22 NOT THE OTHER JEFFERY

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 20 days ago

laid back/funny-ish anime recs needed

everyones SO into anime so i thought i was missing out so I decided to watch death note. i could not make it past ep 17 idk why like some parts were boring and too slow

i think im looking for smth more laid back and funny? not sure. could someone recommend me smth to watch? btw ive never watched anime the only anime ive watched is death note

i think im looking for smth fun and chill and puts me in a good mood. maybe romance too!

thank u

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 21 days ago

i dont wanna stay in state im scared asf

my parents r making me apply ED UVA and if i get in my lifes over bro its gonna be like high school 2.0 im gonna see so many ppl i know there. i just want a FRESH START and get out of this hellhole of virginia GET ME OUTTT IM NOT EVEN EXCITED FOR COLLEGE ANYMORE

(btw im not saying im getting in or whatever im just like scared like IF i get in bc i cannot turn down such an amazing offer from a prestigious college for my finance major so like ill have to end up going there ukwim)

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 21 days ago

u guys all literally need long hair

im going thru this sub and in a female perspective half of yall could look so so so so so much bettter if you just had longer hair like omg 😭 u guys dont even look bad just grow out the mfing hair bro

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 23 days ago

im so mfing tired

ok im going to keep this brief but im lwk very bitter about the ppl at my school and just ppl in general. Everyone keeps starting bs clubs and this and that and wow yeah theyre actually like making an impact and promoting their stuff but im just very sad about all this. Theyre doing things that theyre gonna stop the MOMENT they get into college. like my school genuinely has over 100 clubs and half of them are just bs start to name themseleves founder/president and give their friends leadership..ppl js be doing anything for college acceptances bro...

im just irritated asf because i feel like now im not gonna get into college just cuz i didnt do things JUST for college ukwim? like i didnt go ahead and start my own clubs because im just not passionate about any of this so im acc living my truth. instead i have like 2-3 ecs im acc passionate ab and ive been doing since elementary school. but now thats NOT ENOUGH BECAUSE EVERYONE IS MFING DOING TOO MUCH ITS LIKE AN EC INFLATION AND NOW I LOOK BAD EVEN THO IM DOING THINGS I ACC LIKE

and to add salt to the wound my parents dont believe in me anymore. i wanna ed to cornel but my mom said i would never get in because i didnt start any clubs or projects to a nonprofit...like...my parents genuinley think im dumb asf because im following my passions UNLIKE LITERALLY EVERYONE ELSE. THEY DONT UNDERSTAND EVERYONE ELSE IS FAKEEEE so i know compared to other ppl im not STACKED but hey ill shoot my shot

and even if i get in theyre gonna say its a fluke lol. whatever. f*ck college apps. cant wait till i graduate

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 23 days ago

core values at cornell?

what are core values at cornell? i know this can be simply found out with a quick google search but i wanted to get to know it deeper from aspiring students or ppl from the actual student body itself

my app is mainly focused on community and service so i was wondering if that resonated with cornells core values since im tryna ED there so matching my application to my ED school would prob make sense

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 27 days ago

elise pham's personal statement youtube video

hey guys im a rising senior but a couple of years back i distinctly remember elise pham posted up a youtube video on her personal statement and exactly how to write one

looking now, i cant seem to find it anywhere. do u guys know what I'm talking about? did she delete it? is it behind a paywall? honestly if it is someone tell me cuz i will pay for that video it was so helpful i wish i screen recorded it in sophmore year or smth

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 28 days ago

scholarship for rising senior in high school?

heyy!

im fairly new to the college process and i am middle-income, so technically i can afford college but my family doesn't just have 400k lying around, so im pretty sure i wont get that much aid even if i get it

im wondering where i can sign up for some scholarships as a high schooler getting ready for college? are there any specific sites to avoid? sites to mainly look out for? etc etc

thank u

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 1 month ago

Absolute 100000% beginner to day trading

Hi guys

When I say I am a beginner I mean i don't even know what trading is. All I have is a debit card, a part-time job, and a dream

Which channels/articles/websites would u recommend to an ABSOLUTE 1000000% beginner who is JUST getting started. Someone who can go from the basics such as what it means and what to expect etc etc

Thank you so much!

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 1 month ago
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mcintire

how does the process work? i heard u apply after your first year, but is that enough time to put ecs and awards on the application?

sorry if its a dumb question

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 1 month ago

this community has become...racist

I was scrolling on here until i saw a post talking about how an "Indian beauty subreddit was making fun of subliminals and users"

first of all, the indian subreddit was not making fun of anyone...the OP of the indian subreddit post was liyterally confused and rightfully so

anyway i clicked on the post here in confusion and i saw that ONE indian was judging two subliminals for changing someones race...into being KOREAN..

and the comments on that reddit were saying "let them indians be chopped" blah blah js overall saying hurtful things to indians

like no way yall r coming at this indian lady for being confused on RACE CHANGE SUBLIMINALS. like WHO WOULDNT BE OFFPUT BY THAT...ITS FETISHIZATION AND IDOLIZATION...

i thought this community was supposed to be positive and uplifting and instead we're bringing down whole RACES? because of SOME comments???? let the nonbelievers nonbelieve and mind ur own businesses im irritated asf

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 1 month ago

which college should i go to?

im a rising senior in high school and college app season is right around the corner. I was hoping to major in finance, but was a little unsure what to put on my college list. im sure this subreddit is filled with experienced people working in the field of finance, so i just wanted to ask you guys what college do u think is worthwhile going to as someone who works in finance? where do they seem to hire the most people from? does where u go undergrad really matter?

thank u!

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 2 months ago

any subs for exams?

exam results come out in 2 days and im TERRIFIED...any subs to ensure all 100s? 😭 im desperate asf

i think its called revision subs(?) since i alr took the exams, not sure tho as im new to this community

THANK U!!

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 2 months ago
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i really wanna get in

im so sorry if this isnt the place to ask 😭 ts kinda a chance-me post so like

as a rising senior could i get in here if im instate and early applicant with a weighted 4.39 gpa and 1480 sat

ill list my ecs if someone asks but i dont want to just yet in case this is not the place to ask

this is lwk the only school i wanna go to

thanks guys

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u/Aggressive-Couple368 — 2 months ago