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▲ 4 r/selfpublish

Seeking constructive criticism for the blurb im putting on the back of my book

The book is a murder mystery that takes place on the moon. Is the blurb too long or too short? Is it intriguing? Here:

Vincy Delkate is a detective who had her life and reputation ruined after uncovering a massive corruption scandal. Desperate to prove herself again and get her life back, she travels to the Moon after learning about the murder of prolific inventor and CEO, Harrison Colt.

Unfortunately, solving this case will prove more challenging than she could've imagined. All she has to work with is the testimonies of the five suspects. Five suspects who may prove untrustworthy.

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u/PieterSielie6 — 19 days ago
▲ 23 r/Scale4BarbaraWalters

Despite Charlie Kirk being born before 9/11, and having died about a year ago, and despite the fact that today is the 25th 9/11 anniversary, Kirk only experienced 23 9/11 anniversaries.

u/PieterSielie6 — 1 month ago
▲ 31 r/BarbaraWalters4Scale

Despite Charlie Kirk being born before 9/11, and having died about a year ago, and despite the fact thagt today is the 25th 9/11, Kirk only experienced 23 9/11s

u/PieterSielie6 — 1 month ago
▲ 192 r/WritingPrompts

[WP] Every month you lock yourself up, as you transform into a werewolf. One day, you discover writing on the wall. You come to learn that your wolfy alter-ego is a chill guy.

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u/PieterSielie6 — 1 month ago
▲ 1 r/KDP

Question about payments

Can you chane when payments occur? Like make it only pay out every month?

They recently made a payment, but since it was an international payment, the amount was 20 ZAR but was going to cost me 50 ZAR. So, Can I make it only pay once the amount is 50 ZAR or more?

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u/PieterSielie6 — 1 month ago
▲ 7 r/AskPhysics

Cant you derive Newton's first law of motion from the second?

If there is no net force acting on an object, then F_net = 0

Since a = F_net / m

Then a = 0

So the object will experience no change in its state of rest or uniform velocity.

Why is Newton's first law distinct from the second?

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u/PieterSielie6 — 2 months ago
▲ 0 r/thething

Has anyone ever tried rewriting The Thing 2011??

Its a good concept for a prequal, but was fumbled by bad cgi and a worse screenplay (seriously I would take a well written prequal with shitty cgi over a dull one with good effects any day)

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u/PieterSielie6 — 2 months ago
▲ 1 r/grammar

Is this okay?

I want to write a moment where a character laments that someone killed their lover.

"And of course… Adrian, that blood lusting monster who TOOK! MY! QUENTIN! FROM! ME!"

Is the term "blood-lusting" okay? And the end of the sentence? I want there to be enphasis on every word.

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u/PieterSielie6 — 2 months ago