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I need some help making my inks more lively. I've done a lot of work this past year to make my work better and I decided I want to lean more on the simpler side than the more technical side of comic book art.
For example of the technical side (last two drawings), my Invincible & Atom Eve pieces were cool to work on, but they took way too much time to complete, & in hindsight they look really stiff & generic.
My most recent pieces (Mikasa, Toph, Teen Gohan and Kid Goku) took way less time to finish, but I feel they're missing something I can't quite put my finger on that'll make them look less amateurish. I tried focusing on the simple efficiency of both Toriyama & Chris Samnee, while sticking to a strict time limit, but there's something lacking in my recent work I can't quite pin down that just doesn't hit where they are yet. Could be as simple as they are traditional & I'm not, I'm not quite sure.
The best of my recent work is the 1st Goku image, but that's mainly b/c it's heavily referenced from Toriyama's work (it was a style study) and I don't want to rely on that as a crutch. The third image is my interpretation of Goku with no reference, and it felt ok but still lacking some oomph.
The last four images are Chris Samnee's work and the second image is Toriyama's work BTW. Everything else is my own. I can't add alt text for some reason to differentiate everything 👀