
u/Darth_Zounds

Why do the Jedi use a cringey and nerdy word like Padawan? Why not just apprentice or even squire? What are they, stupid?
That's it, that's my post...
Go away now.
[WIP] Here are several more comic script pages of my Star Wars satire inspired by the likes of Deadpool, Freakazoid, and the Tick!
[WIP] Seeking feedback on my Star Wars parody comic script inspired by The Force Unleashed - thank you for reading!
This is a *comic script* of a satirical retelling of "The Force Unleashed" inspired by Spaceballs, Space Quest, Hitchhiker’s Guide, as well as characters such as Deadpool, Freakazoid, and The Tick. I’m especially looking for feedback on pacing, dialogue, comedy, and comic readability.
*Once I feel the script is complete, then I will adapt it into pictures with speech balloons, etc!*
Thank you for reading!
[WIP] Seeking feedback on my Star Wars parody comic inspired by The Force Unleashed - thank you for reading!
This is a satirical retelling of "The Force Unleashed" inspired by Spaceballs, Space Quest, Hitchhiker’s Guide, as well as characters such as Deadpool, Freakazoid, and The Tick. I’m especially looking for feedback on pacing, dialogue, comedy, and comic readability. Thank you for reading!
Isn't this a comic writing subreddit?
My last post was removed; I was only posting about my work in progress comic script of my satirical take on one of my favorite Star Wars stories, The Force Unleashed.
How do I post about my comic script without getting it removed?
[WIP] I'm writing a comic that's a retelling of "Star Wars: The Force Unleashed" but with an AU main character whose personality is infused with Deadpool, Freakazoid, and the Tick; I'm calling it "Darth Zounds: One Push Sith"!
Please excuse me if this is a stupid question...
Would it be okay if I share on here at least a few pages of a comic script that I plan on making into an AI comic sometime soonish?
In case anyone may be interested, I'm currently writing a comic that'll be a direct parody of "Star Wars: The Force Unleashed" in the same vein as Spaceballs, Space Quest, and the Hitchhiker's Guide! 😄
Hello there! I'm working on a satirical comic adaptation of The Force Unleashed inspired by Spaceballs, Space Quest, and the Hitchhiker's Guide; it's a work in progress, but here are the first few pages of my script so far - enjoy!
It'd actually be bad-ass if you got physically more muscular every time you *exercise* use of the Force! XD