I want to review the game on my channel, it's incredible but something doesn't sit well with the songs' lyrics for me and I want to understand what is actually going on. Is the lack of poetry intentional or is it just poor songwriting? The music is top notch
I was in absolute shock when Benjy's song was playing, I couldn't believe something so broken passed, you could tell the singer was struggling to hold the melody because the lyrics are so crammed together and clearly not designed for smooth singing.
We have many well written country songs that tell entire stories, murder ballads that do both storytelling and poetry at the same time. What I felt when listening to Benjy's song was like I was listening to a design document for the game being sung.
The issue proceeded with Two Toe Tom and from what I can see it keeps being like this for the rest of the game.
Is there something I'm missing? Are these songs written so awkwardly on purpose not minding syllables and verse structure or is it all just poor songwriting?
The melody is fine, the music in the game is phenomenal and so are the sound effects.
I'm a visual artist, not a musician but even so I can tell the lyrics just don't work