u/PuzzledComputer4696

helloo! okay, overview of what was changed and what meeds improving + slide 2 is from yesterday! and before i get any comments saying im comparing a finished piece to a sketch.. the original WAS completed in my eyes pre critique. last slide is my body reference i used :)

- i removed most of the line art and spread the detail out more even in the piece

- i added more texture to differentiate between surfaces as everything had the same texture in my first version

- made her features better fit her body type. Removed the very defined neck, jawline and collarbone!

- added a wider range of values so it would not look nearly as flat and boring.

but now.. what needs to be changed? WELL! i know i could do better with anatomy, i need to better my understanding of color theory and color relationships aswell as value hierarchy aswell as practicing drawing HANDS. i believe my skin rendering could use some more work with further color variation in the skin but! I think todays is a improvement over yesterday.

ive been hav a hellish day so i am SO happy to now have kirika and ui!

no labyrinth or familiar designs this time, sorry guys :( i DO have her description + familar names! The Lurking Devil witch. Her nature is Possesion. She stomps about her labyrinth in a large false body, but her real self cowers inside. the witches true body is much larger than the false one but, too afraid to leave her false body, she expels any living thing from her labyrinth that she doesn’t intend on eating insisting they’re getting in her way and that she does not need them. her familars are Lankester and Damien.

Ignore the fact he has no nose. this is a wip. anywhom! i really need some help w/ making this characters face look more visibly chubby considering the angle! hes meant to be looking down a bit. im so frustrated w/ this piece already and the fact his double chin looks like a sticker is sending me over the edge 😭 i’d also like any advice for rendering the skin! any pointers would be appreciated for that aswell.

im terrified of drawing the torso! its my worse enemy. but! i decided to face my fears and sketch a piece idea i have that i’ll finish tomorrow :)

hello! basics: im going for semi realism, leaning towards the more stylized end of the spectrum. this is a MASK! its made to look human but this character is not. what more can i add to make it feel more 3d AND enhance the uncanniness of it considering its made to look human.. but isn‘t. slide 2 is what i loosely referenced for the general perspective :)

slide 1s today and slide 2s from a few months ago ^^

hi! basic info: i aim for a semi realistic style, this character is meant to be plus sized with a chubby face and she’s a demon with some goat features :) this piece has me frustrated to the point of tears and i don’t really know how to fix it. i can’t tell if i’ve just been staring at It for too long. my references for her eyes + head angle are in the last slides! i’m not good at faces so i desperately need some guidance! I have not been doing art for very long at all 💔

decided 2 check my progress so.. heres a redraw of a piece from near the beginning of the year! :D

this is still the sketch BUT! i fixed some proportions and decided to NOT crop it to hell! if anyone has any further critique or suggestions please let me know! :D im unsure if the symbolism is clear enough so i’d also like further crit on that aswell and if theres anything further i could add.

obligatory i get very nervous seeking feedback but i hate this so far😭 hi! I’m a beginner and am trying to do a nice moody piece but. this looks really wrong doesn’t it? i am going for a realistic / semi realistic style, my references are attached in the last two slides! I feel the eyes, chin, lips, and forehead area are off but i don’t know how to actually fix it :,) i’ve been working at it all day so i’m pretty darn frustrated with it. I can tell somethings wrong, but don’t know what to do to make it better 💔 and i would also like tips for drawing the ear! i don’t like ears all that much.