u/Unlucky-Quarter-5455

I'm sorry but with all due respect, Gamzee should have way more lines in act 6. I don't care how much it shows his meta writing of being the guy who ruins the story by committing awful actions without them being explained or by being vague. He should speak, we should look into his Pov more, this doesn't work for the show imo. I'm not saying he should get a 3 hour introspection episode and documentary. But I think he could still be an obnoxious,creepy kid and fill his role of ruining the story while still diving a bit more into him and the relationship with other characters like Terezi whose relationship is awfully vague. It would be nice to see more even if it's like a 5 second flashback of Gamzee throwing a bottle of Faygo on her head and telling her to bring him another one.

Dude's being forced to fight figures who look like his old dead friends.

Here's somethings imo:

-Make every character with a "your name is" scene have their body obscured until a character arrives to their "your name is" scene or maybe show it for a second during some scenes like when Tavros raps with Dave and we see him; for example when Dave talks and we see him with the split screen,like the pilot did, he should have his body obscured in a red colour until the episode/scene where we meet him;

-Dave's expressions and voice yadayadayada;

-Although characters like Spades slick don't really talk they should still make some sounds and noises that we can't understand while the narrator describes the action;

-The show has to suddenly change art styles just like in the comic;

Most boxers have some sort of resemblance to the country their from. Soda has the Russian alcohol thing, Piston Hondo always mentions Sushi and reads Manga,etc. Aside from his theme and the intro Cutscene where he's in Turkey, is there anything else?

I'm not talking about him being a juggalo but the way he acts in the story feels so distinct I don't really find similarities in other Medias. Eridan is easily the "incel" character that is found in other characters, tavros is the "kind" and one, etc. Gamzee was definitely the "goofy" one but that was before he snapped and it's not enough to describe completely his character. He's definitely has the religious lunatic side that's for sure. What do you think?