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SLEEP CYCLE COMPLETE

WAKE SEQUENCE INITIATING

A loud hissing filled the air as the tight seals on the cryo chamber unhinged The pale vapors curled onto the floor in slow but steady waves until it all disappeared into nothing

That's when Evie's eyes finally fluttered open. For a moment, she forgot where she was

All she could see was a blurry, drywall ceiling, covered in what looked like stained explosions

The cold finally struck her bones Harsh and unexpected, sending a current down her spine

It made her numb and stiff hand twitch in the slightest, as if it was learning to function for the first time again.

Evie lifted her weak arm and pressed her hand against the fogged glass of the chamber, smearing the condensation, trying to peer through the hand mark.

The chamber unlatched with a sharp click with a commanding female voice from the control panel immediately following

WAKE SEQUENCE COMPLETE

"Shut up," she groaned like a moody teenager.

Evie took in a deep breath, letting the air fill her lungs, but it tasted off. It wasn't the crisp and sweet air she was expecting. It was stale and metallic, like the tainted air had been lingering around for years.

No.

Not years

She swung her legs around and sat up slowly-using her forearms to support her cold and weak body-with her bare feet hitting the frigid tile.

Her room was quiet. Not the peacefu quiet, but unsettling type of quiet-almost unsafe

She'd never felt unsafe in her own bedroom before,

She looked around

It was exactly how she remembered it the night before, with everything in its place.

Except it wasn't. Her new music posters on the wall, tearing at the edges, with the pictures almost completely faded. Her side table lamp had a layer of gray dust that resembled ash. And the air.. it felt heavy. Poisoned-eating away at your throat, making it nearly impossible to take a deep breath. Her head whipped over to the chair beside the cryo chamber. There lay a respirator mask, exactly where it should be. Untouched, waiting for her.

This is my first time really writing a book and I want to be sure I am doing it right

Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated on anything i could improve on thanks

Does anyone know how often starset releases new music like it it a year or 2 years in between

How big do you think starset will be in the next 2-3 years?

Hi, so i am working on a book that is in the year 5077 on a planet of acid gas/rain in a post apocalypse (inspired by my favorite band starset) it’s very sci-fi scientific with elements of quantum matter

But once the book is completed is it worth it to self publish?

What would be a great option for self publishing?

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I only have a basic idea in terms of the plot and for characters I have Evie, Jeckll, Hyde, Finn, Lucy and Ruby. Evie is a little inspired by Imogen from the book series fourth wing Evie is a aspiring content creator who is finn's romantic interest Finn is a Atmospheric Chemist and Ruby is a Environmental Scientist and musician as well as Finn, Evie, Lucy and Ruby.

The Premise of the story is set in 5077 in the aftermath of a virus passed by acid gas particles in the air that slows aging dramatically only aging 1 year in every 111 years

Should I expand on this idea or no?

I'm open to any and all ideas and suggestions

This is my first time trying to write an actual book so please give suggestions on the structure or anything that seems off

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I only have a basic idea in terms of the plot and for characters I have Evie, Jeckll, Hyde, Finn, Lucy and Ruby. Evie is a little inspired by Imogen from the book series fourth wing Evie is a aspiring content creator who is finn's romantic interest Finn is a Atmospheric Chemist and Ruby is a Environmental Scientist and musician as well as Finn, Evie, Lucy and Ruby.

The Premise of the story is set in 5077 in the aftermath of a virus passed by acid gas particles in the air that slows aging dramatically only aging 1 year in every 111 years

Should I expand on this idea or no?

This is my first time really working on a actual book so please provide useful feedback and suggestions

I only have a basic idea in terms of the plot and for characters I have Evie, Jeckll, Hyde, Finn, Lucy and Ruby. Evie is a little inspired by Imogen from the book series fourth wing Evie is a aspiring content creator who is finn's romantic interest Finn is a Atmospheric Chemist and Ruby is a Environmental Scientist and musician as well as Finn, Evie, Lucy and Ruby.

The Premise of the story is set in 5077 in the aftermath of a virus passed by acid gas particles in the air that slows aging dramatically only aging 1 year in every 111 years

Should I expand on this idea or no?

I'm open to any and all ideas and suggestions

This is my first time trying to write an actual book so please give suggestions on the structure or anything that seems off

I'm interested in seeing/knowing how the other characters act in relationships compared to battle and preparation etc

Especially Imogen

Do you think Imogen would make such a good girlfriend?

Does fourth wing ever fully explain the marked ones rebellion relics and why is Xaden the only one responsible for them all? Maybe i have forgotten the explanation could someone please explain it

Is using ai generated characters for a book you're writing a good thing if you can't draw?

What fourth wing characters are you madly in love with

I'll go first

Violet

Mira

Imogen

Cat

Sloane

Maren

Violet and imogen

Edit Guy btw

Yes violet obviously

But who else...and why

Thoughts or opinions before the spider noir show releases?

Also what other spider verse spider person would you want to have a standalone show like spider-noir.

Are their actually any good dating apps im tired of paying to chat or even use the apps