u/High_MageOfkatoliz

Writing psychological mystery, need feedbacks

Writing a psychological mystery

Hey everyone. I’m 15, and this is my first time ever trying to write a book. I’ve genuinely never written more than a few paragraphs before, so this whole thing is very new to me.

Right now I’m working on a psychological mystery story. I want it to feel tense, unsettling, and emotionally uncomfortable rather than just full of twists for the sake of twists. I’m especially interested in suspense, hidden meanings, unreliable characters, and scenes that slowly make the reader question what’s actually happening.

Since I’m a complete beginner, I’d really appreciate advice from writers or readers who enjoy psychological mysteries/thrillers. I’m trying to learn early so I don’t build bad habits while writing the story.

Some things I’d especially love help with:

\\- Common mistakes beginner mystery writers make

\\- How to keep suspense without revealing too much

\\- How to foreshadow clues without making them obvious

\\- Things that accidentally ruin tension or pacing

\\- How to make dialogue feel natural and meaningful

\\- Tips for writing disturbing or eerie scenes without overdoing them

\\- Ways to keep readers curious enough to continue chapters

One thing I’m struggling with is balancing mystery and confusion. I want readers to feel intrigued, not lost. I also don’t want to “kill” the suspense by explaining things too early or adding twists that feel forced.

I’d honestly appreciate any feedback, warnings, writing tips, or even book recommendations that could help me improve. I know I’m very inexperienced, but I’m taking this seriously and really want to grow as a writer.

Thanks for reading.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 4 days ago
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Writing a psychological mystery

Hey everyone. I’m 15, and this is my first time ever trying to write a book. I’ve genuinely never written more than a few paragraphs before, so this whole thing is very new to me.

Right now I’m working on a psychological mystery story. I want it to feel tense, unsettling, and emotionally uncomfortable rather than just full of twists for the sake of twists. I’m especially interested in suspense, hidden meanings, unreliable characters, and scenes that slowly make the reader question what’s actually happening.

Since I’m a complete beginner, I’d really appreciate advice from writers or readers who enjoy psychological mysteries/thrillers. I’m trying to learn early so I don’t build bad habits while writing the story.

Some things I’d especially love help with:

\- Common mistakes beginner mystery writers make

\- How to keep suspense without revealing too much

\- How to foreshadow clues without making them obvious

\- Things that accidentally ruin tension or pacing

\- How to make dialogue feel natural and meaningful

\- Tips for writing disturbing or eerie scenes without overdoing them

\- Ways to keep readers curious enough to continue chapters

One thing I’m struggling with is balancing mystery and confusion. I want readers to feel intrigued, not lost. I also don’t want to “kill” the suspense by explaining things too early or adding twists that feel forced.

I’d honestly appreciate any feedback, warnings, writing tips, or even book recommendations that could help me improve. I know I’m very inexperienced, but I’m taking this seriously and really want to grow as a writer.

Thanks for reading.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 8 days ago

Writing a psychological mystery

Hey everyone. I’m 15, and this is my first time ever trying to write a book. I’ve genuinely never written more than a few paragraphs before, so this whole thing is very new to me.

Right now I’m working on a psychological mystery story. I want it to feel tense, unsettling, and emotionally uncomfortable rather than just full of twists for the sake of twists. I’m especially interested in suspense, hidden meanings, unreliable characters, and scenes that slowly make the reader question what’s actually happening.

Since I’m a complete beginner, I’d really appreciate advice from writers or readers who enjoy psychological mysteries/thrillers. I’m trying to learn early so I don’t build bad habits while writing the story.

Some things I’d especially love help with:

\- Common mistakes beginner mystery writers make

\- How to keep suspense without revealing too much

\- How to foreshadow clues without making them obvious

\- Things that accidentally ruin tension or pacing

\- How to make dialogue feel natural and meaningful

\- Tips for writing disturbing or eerie scenes without overdoing them

\- Ways to keep readers curious enough to continue chapters

One thing I’m struggling with is balancing mystery and confusion. I want readers to feel intrigued, not lost. I also don’t want to “kill” the suspense by explaining things too early or adding twists that feel forced.

I’d honestly appreciate any feedback, warnings, writing tips, or even book recommendations that could help me improve. I know I’m very inexperienced, but I’m taking this seriously and really want to grow as a writer.

Thanks for reading.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 8 days ago

How to sign for an agency and how they works ?

So i was thinking what roles does agencies play in casting and a friend of mine told me that all the major roles and roles for big shows are casted by agencies. So, I was wondering how to get an agency, like what's the whole process and the work done by them ? Will I have to apply for them to sign me ?

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 10 days ago

So the reason I need microphone is to make good quality of content on my YouTube, i have been recording on my mobile currently but I think I need a mic so rn i don't have a good budget. You can check my voice my voice without mic.

Thanks for your precious time.

u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 16 days ago

So we were working on a project of Doraemon, since the last 6 months, so it's something which we are not gonna drop halfway.

We have animators and scriptwriters and rn we need voice artists 9 chracters.

Character information:

  1. Main lead Doraemon

  2. Side character Nobita ( 80 Y/O)

  3. Nobita's son 45 Y/o

  4. Nobita's son's wife ( 40 probably)

  5. Their son ( 7 Y/O )

  6. Doctor male

  7. Nurse ( female)

  8. News reporter ( female)

  9. Narrator

It's an indie project ( no budget) if you are interested to help us then you can dm me your insta id because it's more efficient to share information there.

You will get proper credits and can use the clips for your portfolio ( only after publish) and we are open to pay you after the project gets funding or gets monetization.

It will be our pleasure to work with you.

With,

Kind Regards,

High_Mage.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 17 days ago

Need voice artists

So we were working on a project of Doraemon, since the last 6 months, so it's something which we are not gonna drop halfway.

We have animators and scriptwriters and rn we need voice artists 9 chracters.

Character information:

  1. Main lead Doraemon

  2. Side character Nobita ( 80 Y/O)

  3. Nobita's son 45 Y/o

  4. Nobita's son's wife ( 40 probably)

  5. Their son ( 7 Y/O )

  6. Doctor male

  7. Nurse ( female)

  8. News reporter ( female)

  9. Narrator

It's an indie project ( no budget) if you are interested to help us then you can dm me your insta id because it's more efficient to share information there.

You will get proper credits and can use the clips for your portfolio ( only after publish) and we are open to pay you after the project gets funding or gets monetization.

It will be our pleasure to work with you.

With,

Kind Regards,

High_Mage.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 17 days ago

So we were working on a project of Doraemon, since the last 6 months, so it's something which we are not gonna drop halfway.

We have animators and scriptwriters and rn we need voice artists 9 chracters.

Character information:

  1. Main lead Doraemon

  2. Side character Nobita ( 80 Y/O)

  3. Nobita's son 45 Y/o

  4. Nobita's son's wife ( 40 probably)

  5. Their son ( 7 Y/O )

  6. Doctor male

  7. Nurse ( female)

  8. News reporter ( female)

  9. Narrator

It's an indie project ( no budget) if you are interested to help us then you can dm me your insta id because it's more efficient to share information there.

You will get proper credits and can use the clips for your portfolio ( only after publish) and we are open to pay you after the project gets funding or gets monetization.

It will be our pleasure to work with you.

With,

Kind Regards,

High_Mage.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 17 days ago

So we were working on a project of Doraemon, since the last 6 months, so it's something which we are not gonna drop halfway.

We have animators and scriptwriters and rn we need voice artists 9 chracters.

Character information:

  1. Main lead Doraemon

  2. Side character Nobita ( 80 Y/O)

  3. Nobita's son 45 Y/o

  4. Nobita's son's wife ( 40 probably)

  5. Their son ( 7 Y/O )

  6. Doctor male

  7. Nurse ( female)

  8. News reporter ( female)

  9. Narrator

It's an indie project ( no budget) if you are interested to help us then you can dm me your insta id because it's more efficient to share information there.

You will get proper credits and can use the clips for your portfolio ( only after publish) and we are open to pay you after the project gets funding or gets monetization.

It will be our pleasure to work with you.

With,

Kind Regards,

High_Mage.

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 17 days ago

Need voice actors

Need voice artists

So it's something which you were not expecting, but we are working on a project for doraemon and have script, animation directors, animators but the thing we don't have is budget. I am not asking for funds we need voice actors who can help us, it's something which ai can't do our script is different, it's flooded with emotions which ai can never do.

So if you are a voice actor and can help our indie development. So, we'll be greatful

You will get proper credits and can use clips in your portfolio only after publish and If we got monetized we are open for paid collaborations.

For any further inquiry and if you are interested you can contact me

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 18 days ago

So it's something which you were not expecting, but we are working on a project for doraemon and have script, animation directors, animators but the thing we don't have is budget. I am not asking for funds we need voice actors who can help us, it's something which ai can't do our script is different, it's flooded with emotions which ai can never do.

So if you are a voice actor and can help our indie development. So, we'll be greatful

You will get proper credits and can use clips in your portfolio only after publish and If we got monetized we are open for paid collaborations.

For any further inquiry and if you are interested you can contact me

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 19 days ago

So it's something which you were not expecting, but we are working on a project for doraemon and have script, animation directors, animators but the thing we don't have is budget. I am not asking for funds we need voice actors who can help us, it's something which ai can't do our script is different, it's flooded with emotions which ai can never do.

So if you are a voice actor and can help our indie development. So, we'll be greatful

You will get proper credits and can use clips in your portfolio only after publish and If we got monetized we are open for paid collaborations.

For any further inquiry and if you are interested you can contact me

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u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 19 days ago

So it's something which you were not expecting, but we are working on a project for doraemon and have script, animation directors, animators but the thing we don't have is budget. I am not asking for funds we need voice actors who can help us, it's something which ai can't do our script is different, it's flooded with emotions which ai can never do.

So if you are a voice actor and can help our indie development. So, we'll be greatful

You will get proper credits and can use clips in your portfolio only after publish and If we got monetized we are open for paid collaborations.

For any further inquiry and if you are interested you can contact me

reddit.com
u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 19 days ago

So it's something which you were not expecting, but we are working on a project for doraemon and have script, animation directors, animators but the thing we don't have is budget. I am not asking for funds we need voice actors who can help us, it's something which ai can't do our script is different, it's flooded with emotions which ai can never do.

So if you are a voice actor and can help our indie development. So, we'll be greatful

You will get proper credits and can use clips in your portfolio only after publish and If we got monetized we are open for paid collaborations.

For any further inquiry and if you are interested you can contact me

reddit.com
u/High_MageOfkatoliz — 19 days ago