
Do your worst - tear this apart
My partner and I recently launched a modern style mens golf apparel brand and really want to nail the branding side of things. I think were having some trouble finalizing the copy style , "seriousness" or premium feel of the brand , and what brand message we really want to put out there on ads / content etc. We have a few USP's but trying to decide on 1 message for 1 audience that creates some tension especially as a brand that sells unique products in its industry.
Anyway would love for you guys to tear it apart on the brand side and shoot some holes in it. Whats missing, out of place, etc.
*praying mods let this post since it is NOT us promoting.