Planned RWBY Rewrite: New Journey For Bumblebee

I am planning a full headcanon rewrite for RWBY in the near future, and I would like to get the FNDM's opinion on the new journey I have planned for Blake and Yang to get together.

Here is the plot I have come up with:

-Team RWBY's time at Beacon (Volumes 1-3) will be extended to cover the full four years at Beacon (the Breach will happen midway through Volume 2 (which will be the end of their second year) and Cinder's attack that leads to Beacon's Fall will occur just as the graduation ceremony for Team RWBY's year is starting to take place).

-During this extended time at Beacon, Blake starts to open up to the rest of her team a lot more. She begins coming out of her shell, conversing and sharing interests with her teammates more often, and most importantly, starts learning to trust people again. This is helped by an earlier reunion with her parents (they saw news footage of Blake fighting during the Breach and rushed to Vale to make sure she was okay).

-Yang still loses her arm to Adam during the Fall, but just as he's about to kill Yang and Blake, Raven shows up and defeats him, forcing him and the White Fang to retreat. After the Fall, Raven returns to the heroes' side full-time and reassembles what's left of Team STRQ (minus Summer) to lead the resistance against Salem.

-When everyone is safely back at Patch, Blake tries to leave to hunt down Adam and kill him herself for what he did to Yang and their friends. However, Sun and Raven persuade her not to do this and convince her to stay and help Yang and everyone else heal and recover.

-Volume 4 is mostly a therapy volume, with everyone (minus Weiss, who was kidnapped against her will by her father and brought back to Atlas) working together to come to terms with everything that's happened, as well as training, recovering their fighting spirit, and secretly gathering allies together for a full-scale assault to retake Beacon (this will be my Volume 4's climax).

-The assault on Beacon is a success, but in the midst of their celebrations, Blake gets contacted by Trifa (the spider Faunus) who informs Blake that a civil war has broken out in the White Fang (Adam tried to murder Sienna after she branded him a traitor for allying with a human that was in league with the Grimm, but the attempt failed and a civil war broke out in the Fang). Blake, rightly realizing her parents are in danger, announces she's leaving for Menagerie to get Ghira and Kali "out of the coming crossfire", and Yang reluctantly accepts this plan (but makes Blake promise to stay in touch with everyone and be careful).

-During their time apart, Blake and Yang will come to realize that they've fallen in love with each other. However, they don't know if their feelings are mutual, so they don't act on them. And even after they are reunited at the Battle Of Haven, the Bees are still unsure if their romantic feelings are mutual.

-But then Brunswick Farms happens. The attack by the Apathy swarm, in which the heroes are nearly mindraped and transformed into Apathy Grimm themselves until Ruby's silver eyes save the day, convinces Blake and Yang to admit their feelings for each other after everyone is safe at Saphron and Terra's house. They come to realize that life is too damn short in this world to worry about "what-ifs" and finally become an official couple.

-In addition to Bumblebee becoming official, the Apathy attack also changes the dynamic of Team RWBY as a whole. After a long sit-down discussion, WBY promise to not take Ruby for granted anymore and always pull their own weight as teammates and friends instead of piling everything on her from now on. Ruby promises in turn to be more open with her teammates and more willing to admit if she is struggling and needs help from that point forward.

That's my plan for how Bumblebee will get together in my planned RWBY headcanon rewrite. I would love to hear any thoughts you have on my planned vision of their story arc.

As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 44: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 22 On YT

Welcome to episode 44 of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse" FNDM!

Today, we bring the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime back to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the RWBY Chibi universe.

The RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 22, which contains the shorts "Game Night," "Security Woes," and "Floor Is Lava".

What do you think the reactions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts, FNDM? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 43: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 21 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse", FNDM!

Today, we bring the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime back to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the RWBY Chibi universe. After today's episode, we only have three more episodes in the first season!

The RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 21, which features the shorts "Friend Forever," "Letter To Winter," "Checkmate," and "Cinder Who?".

What do you members of the FNDM think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 42: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 20 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse", FNDM!

On today's episode, we bring the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime back to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the first season of the RWBY Chibi universe.

Today the RWBY characters will react to Season 1 Episode 20, which features the shorts "Double Trouble," "Zwei Vs Beowulf," and "Roman's Revenge".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be after watching this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 41: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 19 On YT

Welcome back to the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse", FNDM!

We are in the homestretch with showing the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime the first season of the antics and hilarity of the RWBY Chibi universe, ladies and gentlemen! After today's installment, we just have five more episodes in Season 1. Don't worry, though; we are by no means finished with showing the RWBY ensemble the antics of their Chibi counterparts!

Today, the RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 19, which features the shorts "Life Of Zwei" and "Pillow Fight".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to these latest two slice of life antics by their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 40: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 18 On YT

Welcome to episode 40 of "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"; the discussion and survey series where we in the FNDM show the RWBY ensemble a portion of the RWBY Multiverse that we help create every day and write what we think their reactions and opinions of the section of the multiverse they are being shown would be.

For today's episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the RWBY Chibi universe. They will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 18, which contains the shorts "The Return Of The Pickles," "Evil Plans," and "Butler Of Cakes".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this latest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 39: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 17 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse," FNDM.

Today, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the RWBY Chibi Universe.

The RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 17, which contains the shorts "Bathroom Break," "Save Nora!" and "Upgrade Time".

What do you in the FNDM think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this latest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 38: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 16 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

Once again, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through the RWBY Chibi section of the RWBY Multiverse.

This time around, the RWBY characters will react to Season 1 Episode 16, which features the shorts "Bike Race," "Stand Up Yang," and "Jaune Ennui".

What do you in the FNDM think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 37: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 15 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

Today, FNDM, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their journey through Season 1 of the RWBY Chibi Universe.

This time, they will react to Season 1 Episode 15, which features the shorts "Bad Boy Jaune," "Neptune's Phobia," and "Nora's Gift".

How do you think the RWBY ensemble would react to this newest batch of adventures and antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 36: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 14 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

For today's episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime once again return to our multiversal theater and museum to react to the adventures of their counterparts in the RWBY Chibi universe.

The RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 14 this time around. This episode features the shorts "Tired Blake," "Big Vacation," and "Junior Detectives: Bad Cop."

What do you think the reactions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this latest batch of adventures from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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u/SandwichMaterial9574 — 10 days ago
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Planned RWBY Headcanon Rewrite: New Semblance For Yang Part 2 (Image Courtesy Of RWBY Wiki)

A couple of months ago, I made a post asking for suggestions/ideas as to an alternate Semblance for Yang Xiao Long.

In my headcanon rewrite for RWBY that I am planning, Yang was a character that I wanted to make several changes to, and one of the main ones was her Semblance. I wanted Yang to have a Semblance that still made her the heavy-hitter of Team RWBY, but wasn't something that required her to take damage in order to power/charge it.

When I made that post, I received a multitude of very cool Semblance ideas (a very big thank you to all who sent replies). And after much deliberation, and using some of the ideas I was sent as a guide, I have finally settled on what Yang's new Semblance will be in my headcanon rewrite.

Yang's new Semblance is going to be called Critical Strikes. Critical Strikes has two effects. First, the more Aura Yang has (she has identical Aura reserves to Jaune), the more damage her strikes deal (the damage drop-off is why her preferred firearm attachment for Ember Celica is shotguns). Second, when Yang's strikes hit a vital area/weak spot on her opponent's body (i.e. their throat, sternum, groin, collarbone, joints, old injuries, etc.), she deals extra damage to her opponent's Aura and has a much higher chance of breaking their Aura.

I'd love to hear everyone's thoughts on the final result that I've come up with for Yang's new Semblance. As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 35: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 13 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

On this newest episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum where they will continue their viewings of the RWBY Chibi Universe.

Today, the RWBY characters shall react to Season 1 Episode 13 of RWBY Chibi. This episode features the shorts "Spin The Bottle," "Blake Vs Zwei Part 3," and "Nora's Workout".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this latest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 34: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 12 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

Once again, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to our multiversal theater and museum to continue their viewings of the RWBY Chibi Universe.

For today's episode, the RWBY characters will react to Season 1 Episode 12, which features the shorts "Littering" and "Little Red Riding Hood".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 33: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 11 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse".

Today, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime return to view the next installment in the RWBY Chibi universe. They will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 11, which contains the shorts "Ren Makes Pancakes," "Jaune ASMR," and "Nurse Ruby".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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u/SandwichMaterial9574 — 13 days ago

Planned RWBY Rewrite: New Journey For Bumblebee

I am planning a full headcanon rewrite for RWBY in the near future, and I would like to get the FNDM's opinion on the new journey I have planned for Blake and Yang to get together.

Here is the plot I have come up with:

-Team RWBY's time at Beacon (Volumes 1-3) will be extended to cover the full four years at Beacon (the Breach will happen midway through Volume 2 (which will be the end of their second year) and Cinder's attack that leads to Beacon's Fall will occur just as the graduation ceremony for Team RWBY's year is starting to take place).

-During this extended time at Beacon, Blake starts to open up to the rest of her team a lot more. She begins coming out of her shell, conversing and sharing interests with her teammates more often, and most importantly, starts learning to trust people again. This is helped by an earlier reunion with her parents (they saw news footage of Blake fighting during the Breach and rushed to Vale to make sure she was okay).

-Yang still loses her arm to Adam during the Fall, but just as he's about to kill Yang and Blake, Raven shows up and defeats him, forcing him and the White Fang to retreat. After the Fall, Raven returns to the heroes' side full-time and reassembles what's left of Team STRQ (minus Summer) to lead the resistance against Salem.

-When everyone is safely back at Patch, Blake tries to leave to hunt down Adam and kill him herself for what he did to Yang and their friends. However, Sun and Raven persuade her not to do this and convince her to stay and help Yang and everyone else heal and recover.

-Volume 4 is mostly a therapy volume, with everyone (minus Weiss, who was kidnapped against her will by her father and brought back to Atlas) working together to come to terms with everything that's happened, as well as training, recovering their fighting spirit, and secretly gathering allies together for a full-scale assault to retake Beacon (this will be my Volume 4's climax).

-The assault on Beacon is a success, but in the midst of their celebrations, Blake gets contacted by Trifa (the spider Faunus) who informs Blake that a civil war has broken out in the White Fang (Adam tried to murder Sienna after she branded him a traitor for allying with a human that was in league with the Grimm, but the attempt failed and a civil war broke out in the Fang). Blake, rightly realizing her parents are in danger, announces she's leaving for Menagerie to get Ghira and Kali "out of the coming crossfire", and Yang reluctantly accepts this plan (but makes Blake promise to stay in touch with everyone and be careful).

-During their time apart, Blake and Yang will come to realize that they've fallen in love with each other. However, they don't know if their feelings are mutual, so they don't act on them. And even after they are reunited at the Battle Of Haven, the Bees are still unsure if their romantic feelings are mutual.

-But then Brunswick Farms happens. The attack by the Apathy swarm, in which the heroes are nearly mindraped and transformed into Apathy Grimm themselves until Ruby's silver eyes save the day, convinces Blake and Yang to admit their feelings for each other after everyone is safe at Saphron and Terra's house. They come to realize that life is too damn short in this world to worry about "what-ifs" and finally become an official couple.

-In addition to Bumblebee becoming official, the Apathy attack also changes the dynamic of Team RWBY as a whole. After a long sit-down discussion, WBY promise to not take Ruby for granted anymore and always pull their own weight as teammates and friends instead of piling everything on her from now on. Ruby promises in turn to be more open with her teammates and more willing to admit if she is struggling and needs help from that point forward.

That's my plan for how Bumblebee will get together in my planned RWBY headcanon rewrite. I would love to hear any thoughts you have on my planned vision of their story arc.

As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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u/SandwichMaterial9574 — 13 days ago
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Planned RWBY Rewrite Plot Angle: Jaune x Weiss x Pyrrha Love Triangle And Semblance Malfunction

FNDM, I'd like to get your thoughts on something I want to do as a possible plot angle for my planned RWBY headcanon rewrite.

Here's some major plot points regarding my planned RWBY rewrite:

-I plan to have the Fall of Beacon not occur until what would be RWBY and JNPR's final year at Beacon (Cinder launches her attack just as the graduation ceremony is about to begin). During this extended time at Beacon (which will cover all of Volumes 1-3), Jaune actually starts to return Pyrrha's feelings for him and they start to show the signs of becoming an official couple.

-Pyrrha will survive the Fall, but her Achilles Tendon will be shredded by Cinder's arrow, and she will need to undergo serious rehab for that injury.

-After the Fall, everyone (minus Weiss, who will still be kidnapped and taken back to Atlas by her father, where she and her mother will end up having their own adventures and perils) is staying at Patch, getting therapy, and training (and secretly gathering allies) for a planned assault to retake Beacon from the Grimm (this will be the climax of my Volume 4).

-Team JNR is throwing their full weight into helping Pyrrha with her rehab, but Jaune and Pyrrha's romantic relationship is now on the rocks because she sent him away in that weapons locker during the Fall. As such, his trust in her has taken a major blow and he starts having his feelings for Weiss come back (whenever Pyrrha tries to bring up the issue, he basically just blows her off and changes the subject, much to her chagrin).

-At the same time, Weiss, during their extended time at Beacon, started to develop feelings for Jaune as well, even though he was becoming closer to Pyrrha. Those new feelings for Jaune still remain after they are reunited at the Battle Of Haven.

-Here's the part I really want your opinion on, FNDM. During their rehab on Patch in my Volume 4, Jaune unlocks his Semblance (which is still Aura Amplification). However, because Jaune hasn't fully figured out what his feelings for Pyrrha truly are, his Semblance will often malfunction and quit working when he tries to use it on her.

-At first this issue is just limited to Pyrrha, but when Weiss rejoins the group, it starts to happen when Jaune tries to use his Semblance on HER as well. This becomes a major problem because it will happen again when Weiss nearly dies at Haven (in my version, though, she doesn't get hit by Cinder's spear because she's not focused and distracted after her fight with Vernal. Instead, Cinder's spear will be aimed at RUBY, and Weiss will shove Ruby out of the way and take the blow). At first Jaune's Semblance is acting unstable when he tries to use it on Weiss, but then Pyrrha takes Jaune's hands and uses her own Aura to help stabilize the process and heal Weiss.

-After Haven, Jaune's Semblance malfunctioning on Pyrrha and/or Weiss will become less frequent, but still sometimes happen. Ultimately, my endgame pairing for Jaune in my rewrite is Arkos. Weiss will ultimately realize Pyrrha is the best choice for Jaune and encourage him to repair and restart his relationship with her, but he will still be hesitant to do so. Jaune and Pyrrha will finally admit that they still love each other thanks to the Ever After, and then Jaune's Semblance will start working properly full-time once this confession is made.

So what are your thoughts on this love triangle plot angle I've created, FNDM? If you were to write a Jaune x Pyrrha x Weiss love triangle plot, how would you write it differently? If you have any tweaks you think I should make to this plot angle, I would truly appreciate any advice you can give.

As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 32: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 10 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse," FNDM!

For today's episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime will return to our multiversal theater and museum to react to more antics by their RWBY Chibi universe counterparts. The RWBY characters will be reacting to Season 1 Episode 10, which includes the shorts "Love Triangle," "Zwei Painting," and "Makeover".

What do you feel the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 31: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 9 On YT

Welcome to the newest episode of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

On today's episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime once again return to the RWBY Chibi universe in our multiversal theater and museum. The RWBY characters will react to Season 1 Episode 9, which contains the shorts "Weiss Studying," and "Ren Plays Tag".

How do you members of the FNDM think the RWBY ensemble would react to this newest batch of adventures from their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse-Episode 30: RWBY Chibi Season 1 Episode 8

Welcome to episode 30 of the discussion and survey series, "RWBY Reacts To The RWBY Multiverse"!

For today's episode, the heroes and villains of Remnant Prime once again return to the world of RWBY Chibi to react to Season 1 Episode 8. This episode features the shorts "Pickle Surprise," "Tubby Tummy," "Magnetic Personality," and "Going Down".

What do you think the reactions and opinions of the RWBY ensemble would be to this newest batch of antics caused by their Chibi counterparts? As always, please be respectful when posting your replies.

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