

Wanting to make a short animated series, need advice!
So this isn't the first series I've ever thought about making. My main project (Bad Scientist) has gotten too big and ambitious to the point where I'm struggling with it, so I thought I'd make a less ambitious project to work on in the meantime so I can figure things out and my overall workflow. Anywho, this is Mildred (or Millie) the fox. She's not very developed, but I thought about her being a spunky chaotic fox that lives her life in the forest, and the conflict of the show is that a greedy corporation builds their giant datacenter on her home, and she gets into wacky antics with the owner of the datacenter called Boring Business Man (yes, that's actually his name) Boring Business man doesn't have a design yet, but I know for sure that he's gonna be a human. The wolf girl on the last slide is even less developed than Mille, she doesn't even have a name yet, but I've thought about her being a stoic character that is tough and physically strong. I do plan on redesigning the wolf, I don't think her clothes suit her well tbh. I also plan on this being a talkless show, so the animation will do all the work, and I can learn how to show and not tell. I will be working on this probably on my own completely, but I still want some advice and constructive criticism as much as possible! Any feedback is appreciated!