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Title: The Stranger with the Black Mask

God—what is beneath that black mask,

Let me fly there and do ask.

What a stranger I've just seen,

A devouring look and eyes pretty clean—

God, please let happen a simple task:

Remove that god-damn bloody mask.

Sin it would be to hide such a face,

If not today, then extinct will be her trace.

This train moves at a constant pace,

But I’m falling faster for that face.

The engine keeps a steady beat,

While I am melting in my seat.

Dawning sun loses its magnification,

Stupid heart in her immense attraction.

From the window, she maps the earth,

Seeing her is my reason for birth?

You’ll say, "Why the eyes again?"

Cause culprit makes attention gain.

Oh hell, she is so fucking gorgeous!

Being her two seats apart—atrocious.

A gentleman aside changed his seat,

A stranger, but God give him a treat.

Yes, the kind stranger had flew,

Still the mask makes the process due.

God, that face defines pure innocence,

And the soul shaped by benevolence.

Wonderful, so it makes me guess,

Her future partner would be a bless.

That goofy mask and yellow scarf,

Crushing me in the bloody half.

Also window glass, the enemy,

Showing an angel unknowingly.

Yaar! She removed the mask for a while,

But luck of this boy, worse by a mile.

Was checking something below the glass,

And back to the cage went that mask.

I raised my neck for one last view,

To see the face that I barely knew.

Eyes searching wild through every row,

Wondering where did that angel go.

Alas! Time came and she is gone,

Just stood, walked, and the angel flown.

Got punched by reality, so sad,

She is gone, the one I never had.

Stranger, you are gone forever and ever,

And this idiot would see you never.

Hope you’ll find someone deserving,

Here ends the journey—amazing!!