u/YoitstheTeddyGuy

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The Sun

The Sun
I hear God,
I feel Him everywhere,
But why can’t I see
Where is Thee?

Then I heard,
The light in the sky,
Leads us like sheep and shepherd.
But don’t look,
For it is too bright.
But where is Thee?

I saw the light,
Disappear into the ocean water,
As if the clouds dip,
Chips in tea.

I waited longer,
But to no avail,
The darkness seems to prevail.
And when all hope was lost,
I saw the light emerge across.

That’s when I noticed,
Thee is nobody but you,
Move through the sky,
Lead us with sly,
Help us get through,

And now I know,
Who you are.
A true friend to the core,
With love for all small chores.
So my dear,
For once I ask,
Nothing is there for me to fear,
And hence,
Let me lift up the spear.

-Atharva Haldankar.(me!)

[NOTE: I did not want any proper rhyming scheme as I prefer most free verses. You may provide feedback on other things.]

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u/YoitstheTeddyGuy — 2 days ago
▲ 2 r/awards

I found out that it takes 5 awards (free awards) to regain the ability to give them. Is ts true?

I lost my free awards but someone told me I can ge them back this way

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u/YoitstheTeddyGuy — 3 days ago

A trilogy of thumbnails. Would you click?

I wanted to learn how to make professional thumbnails. That was the main goal and objective. How much out of 10?

u/YoitstheTeddyGuy — 6 days ago

Crazy man this is so fast

On r/Medieval_India, I think it’s been 2-3 weeks since it was created.

u/YoitstheTeddyGuy — 7 days ago