u/OkLength7120

Delilah Featherplight. I'm wondering if she seems she is attractive enough or seems like she could be a femme fatale or Western lounge singer? Also she's a Utahraptor

Delilah Featherplight. I'm wondering if she seems she is attractive enough or seems like she could be a femme fatale or Western lounge singer? Also she's a Utahraptor

u/OkLength7120 — 13 hours ago

Blood Jaw. Leader of the Redtail Clan. How would your oc react to him?

He's also like 16 ft tall, cause he's a BIG guy.

Utahraptor Ostrommasi

Mesozoic May and all.

(Also I'll be posting the comic today)

u/OkLength7120 — 1 day ago

Blood Jaw the leader of the Redtail Clan (Utahraptor) he's a make and he's fricken like 10ft tall. (Art by me)

u/OkLength7120 — 2 days ago

UPDATE: After your replies I decided to redesign one of the raptors as a showcase. Here is Blood Jaw. Do you think this is an improvement?

(first image is his original design)

(Second image is him in less ceremonial attire, being more functional for an arid environment)

(3rd, ceremonial attire/ outfit for showcasing himself as the leader of the Plunder (Raptor group))

(4, him feeding his youngest offspring)

(5 him in his full Utahraptor form)

Now I wanted to note that I got help from a native American when designing this redesign.

They said my design wasn't too bad, but might need some tweaking depending on time.

Lore wise, the Red Tail Clan is the only family to keep thier traditional aspects while others go for the more European/ Western styled living (cowboys) due to adaptation and believing the old ways are obsolete.

My friend advised I use the Pabloean due to the time period and the Ute as a base.

Since the Ute came from the Pabloean. They said this would be cool.

I also used more lore focused design as opposed to just native American looks.

I got rid of the totem pole styled shoulder pieces for one. I added more feathers in certain areas cause the Ute liked feathers it seems, I used bone jewelry for his neck piece this time, bear skin and terror bird feathers and other theropod feathers.

The Redtail Clan prides themselves on killing things like bears and terror birds so I used that in the design

Nextly, I had also used smilodon fangs as hanging ornaments on the sides of his face.

I changed some attire aspects to match the Ute more as well.

Overall I tried to fuse my original lore aspects with some Ute influence and I hope this version feels more respectful and realistic in comparison to the first one.

Also the name Blood Jaw was given to him after his first kill being the fact he used his jaws instead of his claws.

But yeah shout-out to u/GrogorothFollower for their help in the design and research.

u/OkLength7120 — 2 days ago

I'll be redrawing the Bunny Musou comic, but featuring my Mei redesign or at least some influence of her

I might keep the original but idk

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I'll be finished today or tomorrow

Before anyone thinks this is me being rude, I had asked u/Gaelelcubano myself if I could

u/OkLength7120 — 3 days ago

Got some cheetah boys. I just wanted to showcase them. What do you think of them?

Many of the design ideas came from stuff like Hoyoverse, CRK, and Suikoden. And of course Egyptian themes and just cheetahs. (And yes I'm legally obligated to showcase each makes cake because I'm under a contract and just do it every time I draw a new male)

u/OkLength7120 — 4 days ago

I drew these Utahraptor OCs (redtail clan) what do you think? You think I did well on the native designs and the Utahraptor look? Should I make more? Whatever, just tell me what you think

u/OkLength7120 — 4 days ago