Grandpa Longneck: Kinger.
Ruby: Ragatha.
Cera: Zooble.
Sharptooth: Caine.
Strut: Bubble.
Chomper: Pomni.
Petrie: Gangle.
Ducky: Jax.
Today I will attempt to fix five major FNAF Characters to hopefully make them more compelling or better then the ones we got originally. These aren't going to be major changes just simple ones to make them more interesting or give them a reason for why they do what they do in the story.
Will start with William Afton himself, and the thing I'm changing about him is his reason for killing Charlotte Emily.
I am someone who believes that William doesn't need to lose one of his kids in order to kill Charlie. My version would have William kill Charlie for a much more selfish and cruel reason, pure outright jealousy of Henry, and more specifically of Charlie herself. William would not be jealous of Henry's skills in robotics or inventing, instead he would be jealous of Henry's family, especially his daughter.
In William's eyes Charlie would be the pure definition of the picture perfect child. Obedient, well mannered, and well behaved. Even the media would love Charlie, and Everytime Henry would be interviewed they would constantly ask him about Charlie and how she's doing, even dubbing her The Princess of Fazbear. Meanwhile William's kids would be completely ignored. This would also be why William is so cruel to his kids because he wants them to be perfect, but they just can't be. So that's my Change for William.
Next is Charlie herself. Now I would keep her protective nature towards the other victims, and keep her being Afton's first victim. Here's what I would change. I would still have her be more aware of certain things, but also still just as confused and angry as the other Missing Children.
Here is what Charlie would be aware of. She and the other children are dead, and the other children need help.
Here is what she would not be aware of. How she died and who killed her. All she would know is that she is dead because bullies locked her out of the restaurant, because of this I'm also making those bullies targets for her aggression and anger as well.
As for why she doesn't do anything to stop The MCI from happening. Well remember in the books where William says that when he wears The Spring Bonnie suit the children think he's one of them. It would be the same for Charlie. Since she doesn't know William killed her, and because he wasn't wearing The Spring Bonnie suit when he did kill her, she simply wouldn't think anything was wrong just Spring Bonnie taking a kid to a special party or something.
It wouldn't be till after The Puppet is moved into the safe room that she would see the other children dead, and then try to help them.
Now for the new reason why she attacks random adults. This is something I included in my own FNAF AU. Charlie and The Missing Children see all adults as these scary monsters with purple eyes completely unaware that they are just normal people. All the attacks from the Animatronics are purely out of fear and defense thinking these scary monsters are going to harm them.
Finally for The SAVETHEM Minigame. Charlie still wouldn't know it was Afton who was the killer so that's why she turns away from him.
As for why she's not present when The Other MCI confronted William. The Puppet would be taken with the toys to be scrapped, but she would escape.
Henry, Henry, Henry. The biggest fraud in FNAF history. Here's what I would change for him.
When it comes to stealing from Edwin I would have Henry feel very guilty about and not want to do it, but be pressured by William into it, and have Henry be too much of a coward to stand up to William.
As for why he does nothing after William starts killing kids, well I would have it so he actually does try to do something but it causes the authorities to believe he was the killer, and so for the next 40 or so years he is locked away in a prison cell for a crime he didn't commit.
What I would do for her is have her be the first one to realize William Afton is their killer. This would however be after The Puppet and toys are taken away to be scrapped so Charlie wouldn't know this.
I would then have her become the new protector of The MCI while also keep her as the one trying to help Crying Child recovery his lost memories.
Last thing I would change for Cassidy would be to have her also not be fooled by The Freddy Mask like Foxy and Puppet.
Last but not least is Michael Afton, who doesn't really need a lot of changes, all I would really do is make it more clear that he is indeed Mike Schmidt, Fritz Smith, Eggs Benedict, The FNAF 3 Guard, The FNAF 4 Player, and The FNAF 6 Protagonist.
As for his motivations in each game. FNAFs 1, 2 and Sister Location would have him helping William. FNAFs 3 and Pizzeria Simulator would be him finding out the truth and trying to stop William, and meanwhile FNAF 4 would just be his guilt of failing to protect both his siblings. It would also include Nightmare versions of The Funtimes as well.
And those are five characters I would make small changes too.
Today I will attempt to fix five major FNAF Characters to hopefully make them more compelling or better then the ones we got originally. These aren't going to be major changes just simple ones to make them more interesting or give them a reason for why they do what they do in the story.
Will start with William Afton himself, and the thing I'm changing about him is his reason for killing Charlotte Emily.
I am someone who believes that William doesn't need to lose one of his kids in order to kill Charlie. My version would have William kill Charlie for a much more selfish and cruel reason, pure outright jealousy of Henry, and more specifically of Charlie herself. William would not be jealous of Henry's skills in robotics or inventing, instead he would be jealous of Henry's family, especially his daughter.
In William's eyes Charlie would be the pure definition of the picture perfect child. Obedient, well mannered, and well behaved. Even the media would love Charlie, and Everytime Henry would be interviewed they would constantly ask him about Charlie and how she's doing, even dubbing her The Princess of Fazbear. Meanwhile William's kids would be completely ignored. This would also be why William is so cruel to his kids because he wants them to be perfect, but they just can't be. So that's my Change for William.
Next is Charlie herself. Now I would keep her protective nature towards the other victims, and keep her being Afton's first victim. Here's what I would change. I would still have her be more aware of certain things, but also still just as confused and angry as the other Missing Children.
Here is what Charlie would be aware of. She and the other children are dead, and the other children need help.
Here is what she would not be aware of. How she died and who killed her. All she would know is that she is dead because bullies locked her out of the restaurant, because of this I'm also making those bullies targets for her aggression and anger as well.
As for why she doesn't do anything to stop The MCI from happening. Well remember in the books where William says that when he wears The Spring Bonnie suit the children think he's one of them. It would be the same for Charlie. Since she doesn't know William killed her, and because he wasn't wearing The Spring Bonnie suit when he did kill her, she simply wouldn't think anything was wrong just Spring Bonnie taking a kid to a special party or something.
It wouldn't be till after The Puppet is moved into the safe room that she would see the other children dead, and then try to help them.
Now for the new reason why she attacks random adults. This is something I included in my own FNAF AU. Charlie and The Missing Children see all adults as these scary monsters with purple eyes completely unaware that they are just normal people. All the attacks from the Animatronics are purely out of fear and defense thinking these scary monsters are going to harm them.
Finally for The SAVETHEM Minigame. Charlie still wouldn't know it was Afton who was the killer so that's why she turns away from him.
As for why she's not present when The Other MCI confronted William. The Puppet would be taken with the toys to be scrapped, but she would escape.
Henry, Henry, Henry. The biggest fraud in FNAF history. Here's what I would change for him.
When it comes to stealing from Edwin I would have Henry feel very guilty about and not want to do it, but be pressured by William into it, and have Henry be too much of a coward to stand up to William.
As for why he does nothing after William starts killing kids, well I would have it so he actually does try to do something but it causes the authorities to believe he was the killer, and so for the next 40 or so years he is locked away in a prison cell for a crime he didn't commit.
What I would do for her is have her be the first one to realize William Afton is their killer. This would however be after The Puppet and toys are taken away to be scrapped so Charlie wouldn't know this.
I would then have her become the new protector of The MCI while also keep her as the one trying to help Crying Child recovery his lost memories.
Last thing I would change for Cassidy would be to have her also not be fooled by The Freddy Mask like Foxy and Puppet.
Last but not least is Michael Afton, who doesn't really need a lot of changes, all I would really do is make it more clear that he is indeed Mike Schmidt, Fritz Smith, Eggs Benedict, The FNAF 3 Guard, The FNAF 4 Player, and The FNAF 6 Protagonist.
As for his motivations in each game. FNAFs 1, 2 and Sister Location would have him helping William. FNAFs 3 and Pizzeria Simulator would be him finding out the truth and trying to stop William, and meanwhile FNAF 4 would just be his guilt of failing to protect both his siblings. It would also include Nightmare versions of The Funtimes as well.
And those are five characters I would make small changes too.
I am specifically talking about an Eren who remains consistent to the end of the story.
No crying over Mikasa, no saying he didn't know why he did The Rumbling, or that he's an idiot or a slave to freedom.
Does a consistent Eren who remains the same character we've been following for all these years deserve a peaceful happy ending?
Scott has said before that the books can be used for clues to figure stuff out in the games even if they aren't in the same continuity, but what exactly did he mean. What clues in the books can also apply to the games?
Like if an object or substance is in the books like remnant or agony should we assume it's also in the games?
What about a character doing something in the books like William taking the classic animatronics and injecting their remnant into the funtimes in the books should we assume he also did that in the games?
If a character acts one way in the books are they most likely like that in the games too?
If a certain event happens in a specific year in the books should we expect to happen that same year in the games?
One is a little girl who while making a few mistakes did at least try to help the other children, but was most likely overcome by fear of the man who killed her.
The other is a grown man who likely knew who the killer was, but instead of going to the police and gathering the evidence he would need to put William away, he instead does nothing for over 40 years while his daughter and other children rot away inside his old business.
Going off of what we currently have seen in both FNAF Anniversary and FNAF Heyday Charlie's portrayal seems to take inspiration from both The Games, Novel Trilogy and Movie.
From The Movie it seems she does have control over The Toys and Withereds, at least until the "Good Ending" however she doesn't seem to have a desire to kill all adults and really seems to only focus on William and possibly Fazbear Employees because she is the one who kills Ralph aka Phone Guy in Anniversary.
Like the games she seems to have a protective nature over the other children.
Like the books it's possible she may not have anything to do with their possession.
In Heyday she is The Antagonist of course but it makes sense considering we are playing as William Afton in that game.
Then in Anniversary she is revealed to be hiding in the vents and if we take enough wrong turns she kills us. However in the games good ending she actually saves us from Golden Freddy. So this may mean that in the third game she will be an ally. Though I do think it will be a begrudging alliance and one of circumstances.
Assuming we are playing as Michael Afton in FNAF Anniversary I don't really think he's Charlie's favorite person right now especially considering what he did to Crying Child. Insight Charlie would probably only work with Michael because they most likely have similar goals of Finding William, and Michael is probably the only person she can really turn to right now even if she doesn't want to?
But what do you think, do you like Charlie's portrayal in FNAF Anniversary and FNAF Heyday, and are you a fan of the idea of her starting off as an enemy before becoming an ally, and is it something you would have liked to have seen in the original games?
It's clear to me that Isayama's goal was Alliance good Yeagerists Evil, but he failed at that because he completely justified The Rumbling by making it so Eren had no other option.
Then he tried to salvage it by having Eren basically say he would likely have done The Rumbling regardless of what choice he was given, if it was a really good choice that could have saved the island.
What could Isayama have done differently that would have justified both The Yeagerists and The Alliance?