Image 1 — The Invocation (and cover) for my book... Thus starts the free serialization of this story on Reddit!.. (Feedback is welcomed)
Image 2 — The Invocation (and cover) for my book... Thus starts the free serialization of this story on Reddit!.. (Feedback is welcomed)

The Invocation (and cover) for my book... Thus starts the free serialization of this story on Reddit!.. (Feedback is welcomed)

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I also have a subreddit dedicated to posting this story, r/Puriheart!..

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 5 days ago

I've realised Lucky Star and Wordgirl have the same way of closing an episode (with a segment from an in-universe show with a famous host), lol...

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 11 days ago

[Loved Trope] A character acknowledges that they are in a dubbed version of a work!..

Both examples are from the Polish dubs of said pieces of media, alongside the afromentioned dubs being written by the same man, Bartosz Wierzbięta!..

  1. Murphy (Rayman 3: Hoodlum Havoc) - Instead of nagging about him still playing a sidekick in a low-budget flick, Murthy instead complains about playing a lackey of some neckless guy (Rayman) in a low-budget localisation!..

  2. Wolf (Hoodwinked!) - Instead of his excuse for why the mouth of his grandma disguise doesn't move is "plastic surgery", Wolf instead says "You know how it sometimes is in dubs" (as in, lip-sync don't always matching with the voice)!..

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 11 days ago

Do You have any OCs that can change from slim to fat (and vice versa) on the fly or in a moment's notice?..

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Because I certaintly have some!.. :

  1. Lady Pax - Her body is made of flames, which makes it very variable to weight-shifts, courtesy of enviromental effects, level of exhaustion and/or comfort and emotions to name a few... Despite being able to get slimmer, Pax prefers to be in her natural pudgy form, to due to it being the default one, liking the extra mass and also being much more mature than her slimmer forms (due to not expelling body mass) and less animalistic than her much thicker forms (due to not having her mind overloaded by extra organic matter)!..

  2. Pufferfighter - Due to her having modified DNA based on a pufferfish, she is able to puff up in size, which she uses for brute force, stronger attacks and more durablility during combat, as well as exposing her poisonous spikes...

  3. Chieftainess Influx - Capable of controlling wind, the usage of this power automatically makes her slowly fill with air/wind, though she usually speeds up this process by transporting a huge influx of air into herself, alongside changes being caused by her emotions... This form is used for ease of floating than needing to use more power for her regular (albeit faster and more nimble) flight as well as a state of comfort for the young ruler...

How about You and Your OCs?..

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 14 days ago

If You want, please give feedback and opinions on the character designs for my "Puriheart" story!..

(slide two is alt designs, that are ocassionally used in the story)

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 16 days ago

Why I can't purchase an Crunchyroll giftcard from the PaysafeCard app and website?.. (FYI: I have required funds)

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

I'm planning on starting releasing my "Puriheart" book project here on Reddit soon!!!

I also created an subreddit for it, r/Puriheart... I also would like to re-ask my question, would Puri be better with rollerskates or not (picture 4)?..

The format this project is planned to be in is an "picture novel", basically an combination of an picture book (in the way it's presented and plenty of illustrations) with an lenghth and/or amount of words more closer to a typical novel... I also plan on it to be written in a whimsical way, but still featuring some darker topics (yet also having an ever present hopeful and optimistic tone)!.. My target demographic is all ages, being planned on having elements that even Adults could relate to and I like on it to be more dialouge/thought-focused...

As for it's genre, I was thinking of "science-fantasy" mixed with fairy tale, taking place on a somewhat surrealistic, heart-shaped planet, alongside featuring some elements carried over from Our modern, contemporary society (such as the way clothing looks, day-to-day life and even some tech, such as game consoles and pop-culture being a thing!), as well as being heavily influenced by the superhero stories!.. Not only that, I also intend on it having Christian theming, but done in a way that's more alegorial and unconvetional (including the depiction of God), so it doesn't feel like an simple brochure for the religion, instead being intended as a fun story for both Christians and non-Christians alike (so more akin to The Chronicles of Narnia and The Prince of Egypt)!..

The main protagonists are the two "Purihearts", red-haired, Pure-Hearted Heroes chosen by The Treenity (stand-in for God, represented by the star on the cover) to help spread Lightness on the heart-shaped Planet Livia and defend it from destructive Darkness... One is Puriheart Puri, an young optimistic boy with a gifted fire sword (which itself is a reference to The Book of Genesis) that only hurts Darkness... His main motivation if everyone to be happy/glad, while also following his personal interests (such as pop-culture)... The other is the often-relaxed flame lady, Puriheart Pax, who also has much focus, being an bear person capable of maintaining huge momentum and shifting her weight, either by force, envoirmental effects or emotions (with the fat state visible being her default, with the fire body also being a gift from The Treenity)!.. She's been an Puriheart for much longer, dealing with more villains, while also acting as an sole parent for her adopted daughter... Pax often has more internal conflicts than Puri... There's also Puriheart Genesis, a close ally of The Treenity, who plays the role of book's narrator and is an character in his (or their, can't decide if he's genderless or not), and is the one responsible to sending the stories from Livia to my imagination!.. (I like to do a framing device of Planet Livia actually existing really far away)

Thank You for reading and God Bless You for lifetime!!! ✌️>❤️•

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

I'm planning on starting releasing my "Puriheart" book project here on Reddit soon!!! I also created an subreddit for it, r/Puriheart... I also would like to re-ask my question, would Puri be better with rollerskates or not?..

The format this project is planned to be in is an "picture novel", basically an combination of an picture book (in the way it's presented and plenty of illustrations) with an lenghth and/or amount of words more closer to a typical novel... I also plan on it to be written in a whimsical way, but still featuring some darker topics (yet also having an ever present hopeful and optimistic tone)!.. My target demographic is all ages, being planned on having elements that even Adults could relate to and I like on it to be more dialouge/thought-focused...

As for it's genre, I was thinking of "science-fantasy" mixed with fairy tale, taking place on a somewhat surrealistic, heart-shaped planet, alongside featuring some elements carried over from Our modern, contemporary society (such as the way clothing looks, day-to-day life and even some tech, such as game consoles and pop-culture being a thing!), as well as being heavily influenced by the superhero stories!.. Not only that, I also intend on it having Christian theming, but done in a way that's more alegorial and unconvetional (including the depiction of God), so it doesn't feel like an simple brochure for the religion, instead being intended as a fun story for both Christians and non-Christians alike (so more akin to The Chronicles of Narnia and The Prince of Egypt)!..

The main protagonists are the two "Purihearts", red-haired, Pure-Hearted Heroes chosen by The Treenity (stand-in for God, represented by the star on the cover) to help spread Lightness on the heart-shaped Planet Livia and defend it from destructive Darkness... One is Puriheart Puri, an young optimistic boy with a gifted fire sword (which itself is a reference to The Book of Genesis) that only hurts Darkness... His main motivation if everyone to be happy/glad, while also following his personal interests (such as pop-culture)... The other is the often-relaxed flame lady, Puriheart Pax, who also has much focus, being an bear person capable of maintaining huge momentum and shifting her weight, either by force, envoirmental effects or emotions (with the fat state visible being her default, with the fire body also being a gift from The Treenity)!.. She's been an Puriheart for much longer, dealing with more villains, while also acting as an sole parent for her adopted daughter... Pax often has more internal conflicts than Puri... There's also Puriheart Genesis, a close ally of The Treenity, who plays the role of book's narrator and is an character in his (or their, can't decide if he's genderless or not), and is the one responsible to sending the stories from Livia to my imagination!.. (I like to do a framing device of Planet Livia actually existing really far away)

Thank You for reading and God Bless You for lifetime!!! ✌️>❤️•

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

I simply cannot believe how well "Vs Woody" by @Jadez107 works with the "Shattered"!.. (edit by me)

Even funnier how "Friend Inside Me" part arrives just as The Foundation's helmet breaks (revealing who's inside the armor)...

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

[Loved Trope] Character (for comedic purposes) metamorphing into an undetailed blob that just barely looks like them...

  1. Kuroe Akaishi - Kaiju Girl Caramelise

  2. Miyu Suzuki - You and I are Polar Opposites

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

You prefer this character with retractable roller skates or without them (first picture is a rough sketch of how they would look like)?.. I personally think that having an swordfighter on skates is an very novel idea!.. Though I don't want to put any safety gear on this character...

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 1 month ago

Pieces of media that are practically always beloved, yet You dislike for one reason or another?..

  1. Sonic Adventure 2 - I dislike the more "realistic" and muddled aesthetics, less fluid controls, blander UI and presentation, how the different playstyles are conjointed (rather that having seperate stories, like SA1), the level design, sheer number of mech stages, less variety in music styles compared to Sonic Adventure (1998/1999) and many more... I'm mostly fond of it's story, though!..

  2. The Dark Knight (2008) - A bit too dull for my taste, I think it doesn't have enough Batman in it and the removal of the stylization from Gotham's aesthetics (compared to "Batman Begins", a movie I love)... Maybe it's an case of "classics becoming clichéd" for me, Who knows?.. On the other, I really like Harvey Dent's story arc though, same with the resolution of the two boats plot!..

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 2 months ago

Is it moral to have an roller skate-wearing character (the four-wheeled variety) without him wearing an helmet?.. Second picture is an example of an pre-existing character lacking an helmet while skating (from "Cardcaptor Sakura")...

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 2 months ago

Which of the book pitches would You want to read sooner?.. (More in the body text)

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I have an idea for two seperate book projects and I wanted to ask which one sounds more appealing to You!.. (AKA, which one would You would want to read more):

  1. An science-fantasy, whimsical story about two "Purihearts", people who were chosen to spread Lightness and good onto the surrealistic, cartoony world they live in... Even if they can't be defeated by normal means, their challenges come from coming up with the ways to improve the lifes of the others and even themselves, so they're much better people to the world surrounding them!.. It's very fairy tale-esque, except more modern and takes some inspiration from the superhero genre... The book takes stylistic approach after Children's books, while still being written like a novel... The demographic would be primarly People aged 7+... (It's protagonists are on the left)

  2. An much more blatantly superhero-themed slice of life story, with an lovely twist: the civilian identities of an hero and an villain accidently fall in love while sharing an workplace!.. The story is focused on how their blossoming love affects their superhero lifes, for example, the villain starts having doubts about using the heroine's weakness after realising what type of pain his love (hero's secret identity) goes through due to alergic reactions to dairy products (which happen to be the hero's kryptonite)... The demographic would probably be "seinen"/young adult, but with lots of whimsy... (It's protagonists are on the right)

The hooded character in white pictured in the third slide is the narrator of both stories, who also plays an active role in them!..

[More info about the "Puriheart" project:](https://www.reddit.com/r/OriginalCharacter/s/KAN8bUKRM8)

[More info about the "Secret Identity Romance" (name is an subject of change) project:](https://www.reddit.com/r/OriginalCharacter/s/LqLbyrAhFW)

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 2 months ago

Which of the book pitches would You want to read sooner?.. (More in the body text)

I have an idea for two seperate book projects and I wanted to ask which one sounds more appealing to You!.. :

  1. An science-fantasy, whimsical story about two "Purihearts", people who were chosen to spread Lightness and good onto the surrealistic, cartoony world they live in... Even if they can't be defeated by normal means, their challenges come from coming up with the ways to improve the lifes of the others and even themselves, so they're much better people to the world surrounding them!.. It's very fairy tale-esque, except more modern and takes some inspiration from the superhero genre... The book takes stylistic approach after Children's books, while still being written like a novel... The demographic would be primarly People aged 7+... (It's protagonists are on the left)

  2. An much more blatantly superhero-themed slice of life story, with an lovely twist: the civilian identities of an hero and an villain accidently fall in love while sharing an workplace!.. The story is focused on how their blossoming love affects their superhero lifes, for example, the villain starts having doubts about using the heroine's weakness after realising what type of pain his love (hero's secret identity) goes through due to alergic reactions to dairy products (which happen to be the hero's kryptonite)... The demographic would probably be "seinen"/young adult, but with lots of whimsy... (It's protagonists are on the right)

The hooded character in white pictured is the narrator of both stories, who also plays an active role in them!..

[More info about the "Puriheart" project:](https://www.reddit.com/r/OriginalCharacter/s/KAN8bUKRM8)

[More info about the "Secret Identity Romance" (name is an subject of change) project:](https://www.reddit.com/r/OriginalCharacter/s/LqLbyrAhFW)

u/Foreign_Diamond1539 — 2 months ago