u/Silent-Woodpecker-44

One specific moment I want to talk about specifically is with his son

Despite seeing him as a disappointment and a freak. He still speared him. He couldn’t go through killing his child

Even after being shot by his ex wives, he felt more proud then anything. His dream of a world of Crossed society is coming true.

His ambitions are more hopeful and kinda selfless. Majority of crossed protagonists are just trying to survive or just be a terrible person

Smokey genuinely wanted to save his race, despite him constantly killing them and worse. But it was all for love

When I first saw Whitley I was also so, disturbed by him

The way he talks feels so inelegantly inhuman, to me he never felt like a real character. He felt line something Jacque specifically created

Every time I saw him it felt like any moment he might snap and kill someone

Listen I’m not trying to be insensitive but the show hits you over and over the head how problematic the Schnee family can be. So seeing someone basically worshipping his bigoted abusive father is unsettling

( side note I was looking back at his scenes and I think majority of the reasons I find him weird is how bright the lightning was when he was introduced. He looked so unnatural in it, it had to be intentional)

I would like some ideas to make her more of her own character

But so far

appearance: a Caucasian woman who was always covered in dirt and had rotting teeth, dry lips, dirty blonde hair, brownish green eyes, and greenish dark spots around her body. She had dirty brown upper clothing and annoyingly loud splash pants, she also has a very noticeable lisp 

Person: She’s unhinged and infantile, and seemingly had an animosity towards humanity due the way she talks about them ( calling them warm bloods) .

Mutation: superhuman leaping and agility, a long, sticky, prehensile tongue, and the ability to secrete sticky or acidic mucus from her body

It’s milk flood instead

Reed lost everything. His team, gf, and his kingdom. The only thing he truly had left was the infinity gauntlets and Kang

But with those gone. All the terrible actions Reed did trying to save the world is stopped by the Ultimates. A plan used to save all of reality But was stopped by the heroes. By the main team

And Reed finally understands

He’s become the villain yes. But the worst type of villain
The villain of the week

Another annoying pest that battles the heroes just to be thrown in a prison

He realizes he isn’t the smart inventor. Or hero. But just another big brain that exists to sell comic books
( ultimates is meta)

But the maker. A character who looks tough. But is just another villain in a sea of other villains

And Reed. Finds that very funny

( note I’m saying Reed can break the forth wall. But during this scene, everyone views him as the villain. Not even the main villain. The henchman. The man who gets his hands dirty for someone else’s work. And sees how big of a joke that is)

This would create a version of Maker who’s a comic classic mad scientist

Firstly, Oscar didn’t deserve getting punched. I know Qrow is mad for being lied too ( we’ll get to that) but, he’s goddamn child who learned to fight like, last week. He’s obviously the youngest and weakest, so him getting falcon punched into a tree. Is kinda fucked up. Especially since nobody asked if he was okay afterwards and I don’t remember anyone apologized for Gannondorfing Oscar face. Especially later on Jaune threatens Oscar afterwards

Secondly, everyone talks about this but the hypocrisy with team Rwby
Their pissed Ozpin was lying. Despite they do the same thing constantly. Really think about this. Your an immortal who lived countless, his children gone, his wife turned against him. Every relationship he’s ever made. Gone. This is most likely not his first team RWBY, every student he trained is dead. Ozpin is a broken man who couldn’t tell Salem is immortal because it most likely it create more doubt which would affect the Grimm

But instead of trusting him. Like what Yang said. They just yell and scream. Which is stupid because they villainized Ironwood for doing the same thing

Kyle is pretty different from other Lanterns
As he’s arguably the strongest Green Lantern. Since he’s a white Lantern

But I feel like you’d be skipping a lot of characters. Mainly Guy and Stewart, I feel like most writers would pick one of them to be White Lantern

Meanwhile Tyrian is getting beaten to death

Cardin: “ would you like some knee pads”

Jaune: “sorry?”

Cardin: “your looking at me like you want to suck my hog. So I’m asking if you want some knee pads

Polka Dot Man
I would’ve made him similar to his suicide squad version. Him being a sympathetic broken man who wants to be a hero. I’d love to see him being Terry side kick or someone being taught by Terry what it takes to be a hero

Tattoo Man
An upcoming gangster using his meta human power to stomp out the competition. Creating mythical monsters or henchmen to do his dirty work

Beard Hunter
Starts off seen as a joke, but is actually a dangerous weapons and combat master. Able to go toe to toe with Terry. He can be in an episode where he’s hunting down any character with a beard

Lord Death Man

A yakuza leader who’s been in Gotham since it was built. And will continue to chaos until he dies. Unfortunately for Terry. He can’t

Seeing a Yautja kill Valentino brutally would’ve been very therapeutic for me

I personally would keep the original justice league designs. Because I genuinely find them awful and little try hard. What I love about crossovers is about two conflicting designs in the same universe. I’d honestly do the Mortal Kombat vs Dc approach with balancing. Superman is weak to magic and RWBY could be confused with magic
I’d also introduce the Legion of Doom to join team WTCH. Vandal Savage with Salem would be cool team up

I’d have them team up not out of respect but actual need. Both ready to betray each other

Small thing but I’d get the voice actor and base design on Arkham Origins Batman. He’s my second favourite version of the character so