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It didn’t come out as epic as I hoped. Since he’s teased for the next season of Rivals I thought why not.

I would have the prologue about Gorr set 3000 years ago he’s an alien. I would keep most of the prologue the same but the god he kills isn’t a 12 foot tall kiwi. At some point the snap from Thanos erased Gorr’s jailers (more on that later) and he continued on his crusade to kill gods.

In the present time Thor is losing weight traveling with the Guardians to look for the shattered pieces of Mjölnir so he can rebuild it. He finds Lady Sif who also has the handle of the hammer, is badly wounded and tells Thor about an ancient being known as the “God butcher” is slaying pantheons and Omnipotence City is calling Thor for him to stand trial for destroying Asgard which Sif is angry at Thor but she still has feelings for him.

They return to earth but a ship but encounter a ship in orbit. Thor and the guardians explore finding cryogenic pods with sleeping aliens in side them. fights Beta Ray Bill but Mjölnir reforges its self and is given to Bill much to Thor’s surprise trying to reason with him accidentally destroys the ship’s navigator. Thor and the guardians work together to save the ship placing it near New Asgard.
Thor tries to wield the hammer again but fails he and Sif argue about why he destroyed Asgard bringing up Hela but Sif wished she could’ve been there to try and save Asgard. The guardians volunteer to fix Bill’s ship only to find out the ship was highjacked by Gorr and you get that fight in New Asgard only Gorr now is standing seven foot tall, he’s more broader and muscular and a lot stronger. As Gorr is about kill Thor and Sif, Bill holds the hammer with full Asgardian armor and powers, setting aside his fight with Thor the three fight Gorr but he takes a portion of the bifrosts power (maybe) and has a vision of Eternity and the Omnipotent city.

(if you have better ideas I’d like to see them) Thor does stand trial for destroying Asgard with Zeus as judge (with him are his son Hercules with his wife Hebe) but also warns The god butcher is free, none of the pantheons believe him (showing their arrogance) Khonshu from Moon knight defends Thor explaining Gorr was the one that almost killed his pantheon (and betraying Ammit) and gave a portion of their powers to imprison Gorr.

Gorr does attack the city where he goes all Kratos he has a short fight with Khonshu then has a “man of steel” fight with Zeus demanding where Eternity is. Badly wounding him Hercules steps in protecting his father but the god butcher easily beats him kidnapping his wife Hebe. Now Hercules joins the trio.

That black and white scenes maybe keep those but have better dialogue, Gorr lures the four into a trap and questions Bill and Sif’s faith almost getting under their skin. Thor is beaten by Gorr ordering him to call the axe so he can use it to find Eternity and kill it using a bomb Gorr left behind thousands of years ago to wipe out all pantheons. Thor asks Gorr why he’s doing this?

“What did your gods take from you?” Thor asks

”everything“ Gorr snarls

”They abandoned my people but like them I prayed for salvation putting my faith and hopes in a hire power that once said they loved us. We suffered and starved as the land dried and the waters vanished. I acted to save my people but they refused holding on to their faith. It was too late. I buried my wife…my only son… beneath the sands. But when I found my god I begged for salvation and he laughed in my face.”

Thor tries to reason with Gorr that it’s not too late telling he was once arrogant and neglectful but he changed. Gorr spits in his face, “the empty promises of an unworthy god“ holding him by the throat, Hercules and Bill break free. There are other ideas like Hercules does save his wife and leaves but Gorr manages to take Stormbreaker by breaking it in half taking a shard of the axe with him.

Defeated Thor almost does give in but he refuses to give up thanks to his love for his people and friends he made along the way. Hercules comes back saying he maybe a half god but I won’t the innocent suffer. They return to the god city and use the shard of Stormbreaker to create Bill’s iconic gold hammer, Mjölnir find Thor worthy again before they leave Sif kisses Thor and all four travel to Eternity. Upon arriving they see the bomb as a living entity ready to consume. The fight with Gorr takes all four of them combined to defeat Gorr (how they destroy the god bomb I’ll leave that up to you) Thor destroys the necrosword with liquifies into a black mass killing Gorr the god butcher.

The ending. Bill with his new powers and rebuilt ship leave so he can find his people a new home, Thor and Sif shake hands with him saying Bill is always welcome into New Asgard as both a friend and an ally and if he ever needs help they’ll always answer. Thor and Sif become a couple vowing to rebuild what was lost and to give faith for their people.

After credits: The black substance from the necrosword flies through space to the farthest deepest and darkest place in the universe so dark there’s no light to a planet known as Klyntar.

Leave comments if you liked it if you have other ideas to put in let me know. There was an idea of introducing Angela as a fifth member but she’s a completely reimagined version where she isn’t Thor’s half sister but as the leader of the angelic guard of the god city but her role was too short and no character build just a small cameo.

this is old. I didn‘t put a lot of thought into drawing this fight.

Now I definitely want Polaris in Marvel rivals.

Fun note: his voice actor Travis Willingham he mo-caped some of the Frost giants in the first movie.